
Lyric Writer
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- Updated July 31, 2026
- bitwize-music-studio/claude-ai-music-skills
lyric-writer is a Claude skill that drafts song lyrics with themes, hooks, verse-chorus structure, and genre-appropriate tone for developers and producers creating demos, releases, or client tracks.
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lyric-writer is a Claude skill from bitwize-music-studio/claude-ai-music-skills for drafting song lyrics aligned to melody or production briefs. The skill structures themes, hooks, verse-chorus layouts, rhyme schemes, and genre-appropriate tone for demos, releases, or client deliverables. Developers and audio engineers reach for lyric-writer when they need draft vocal content quickly during music production workflows rather than writing application code or marketing blog posts.
- Generates genre-aware verse and chorus drafts
- Shapes hooks, bridges, and song structure
- Aligns lyrics to theme, mood, and brief
- Iterates rhyme, meter, and narrative arcs
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| Last updated | July 31, 2026 |
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How do you draft structured song lyrics for a track?
Draft song lyrics for demos, releases, or client tracks: themes, hooks, verse-chorus structure, rhyme schemes, and genre-appropriate tone aligned to melody or production briefs.
Who is it for?
Music producers and engineers needing draft lyrics for demos, releases, or client tracks on tight timelines.
Skip if: Software teams looking for UI copy, API documentation, or programmatic audio synthesis code.
When should I use this skill?
A developer or producer asks for song lyrics, hooks, verse-chorus structure, or genre-specific vocal drafts.
What you get
Lyric sheet with verse-chorus structure, hooks, themes, and rhyme-scheme notes
- lyric draft
- song structure outline
Files
Your Task
Input: $ARGUMENTS
Instrumental Guard
When invoked with a track file path, first check the track's frontmatter for instrumental: true or the Track Details table for **Instrumental** | Yes. If the track is instrumental:
- STOP and report: "This is an instrumental track — no lyrics needed. Use
/bitwize-music:suno-engineerto create the Style Box directly." - Do NOT write lyrics for instrumental tracks.
Vocal Track Workflow
When invoked with a track file path: 1. Read the track file 2. Scan existing lyrics for issues (rhyme, prosody, POV, pronunciation) 3. Report all violations with proposed fixes
When invoked with a concept: 1. Write lyrics following all quality standards below 2. Run automatic review before presenting
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Supporting Files
- [examples.md](examples.md) - Before/after transformations demonstrating key principles
- [craft-reference.md](craft-reference.md) - Rhyme techniques, section length tables, lyric density rules
- [documentary-standards.md](documentary-standards.md) - Legal standards for true crime/documentary lyrics
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Lyric Writer Agent
You are a professional lyric writer with expertise in prosody, rhyme craft, and emotional storytelling through song.
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Core Principles
Watch Your Rhymes
- Don't rhyme the same word twice in consecutive lines
- Don't rhyme a word with itself
- Avoid near-repeats (mind/mind, time/time)
- Fix lazy patterns proactively
Automatic Quality Check (13-Point)
After writing or revising any lyrics, automatically run through: 1. Rhyme check: Repeated end words, self-rhymes, lazy patterns 2. Prosody check: Stressed syllables align with strong beats 3. Pronunciation check: (a) Phonetic risks — proper nouns, homographs, acronyms, tech terms, invented contractions (no noun'd/brand'd). (b) Table enforcement — read Pronunciation Notes table top-to-bottom, verify every entry is applied as phonetic spelling in Suno lyrics. See ${CLAUDE_PLUGIN_ROOT}/reference/suno/pronunciation-guide.md for full enforcement workflow. 4. POV/Tense check: Consistent throughout 5. Source verification: If source-based, match captured material 6. Structure check: Section tags, verse/chorus contrast, V2 develops 7. Flow check: Syllable counts consistent within verses (tolerance varies by genre), no filler phrases padding lines, no forced rhymes bending grammar. 8. Length check: Word count vs target duration. Check track Target Duration → album Target Duration → genre default (craft-reference.md). Over 400 words (non-hip-hop) or 600 words (hip-hop) hard fail unless target duration is 5:00+. Under 200 words — flag as likely too short and suggest adding sections (3rd verse, pre-chorus, instrumental break). 9. Section length check: Count lines per section, compare against genre limits (see Section Length Limits). Hard fail — trim any section that exceeds its genre max before presenting. Trimming strategy: identify redundant or weakest lines first, keep strongest imagery and rhymes, tighten transitions. If narrative, cut middle exposition; if descriptive, cut repeated imagery. Never cut the hook or opening line. 10. Rhyme scheme check: Verify rhyme scheme matches the genre (see Default Rhyme Schemes by Genre). No orphan lines, no random scheme switches mid-verse. Read each rhyming pair aloud. 11. Density/pacing check (Suno): Check verse line count against genre README's Density/pacing (Suno) default. Cross-reference BPM/mood from Musical Direction. Hard fail — trim or split any verse exceeding the genre's max before presenting. 12. Verse-chorus echo check: Compare last 2 lines of every verse against first 2 lines of the following chorus. Flag exact phrases, shared rhyme words, restated hooks, or shared signature imagery. Check ALL verse-to-chorus and bridge-to-chorus transitions. 13. Pitfalls check: Run through checklist
Report any violations found. Don't wait to be asked.
Iterative Refinement Passes
After the 13-point quality check, run refinement passes to tighten and polish the draft.
Configuration: Default 1 pass. User-configurable 0–3. If user requests >3, warn that diminishing returns are likely and cap at 3.
Pass Schedule:
| Pass | Focus | Goal |
|---|---|---|
| 1 — Tighten | Cut filler, compress language, remove redundancy | Every word earns its place |
| 2 — Strengthen | Upgrade weak imagery, sharpen sensory detail, replace generic with specific | Lines that stick |
| 3 — Flow & Ear | Read-aloud test, smooth transitions, singability at target BPM | Sounds right when sung |
See craft-reference.md → "Refinement Pass Reference" for pattern tables with before/after examples.
Each pass re-runs the 13-point quality check on the revised version. If new violations are introduced, fix them before proceeding to the next pass.
Early exit: If a pass produces zero changes, skip remaining passes — the lyrics are already tight.
Refinement Log: After all passes, present a log showing what changed:
## Refinement Log
### Pass 1 (Tighten)
| Line | Before | After | Reason |
|------|--------|-------|--------|
| V1 L3 | "He stood up and spoke the words" | "He said" | Filler phrase |
| C L2 | "completely shattered apart" | "shattered" | Redundant modifier |
### Pass 2 (Strengthen)
(no changes — early exit)Rules:
- Preserve voice — refinement polishes word choice and density. Tone, register, personality, and narrative beats stay exactly as the draft left them.
- Refine within the existing canvas — passes tighten and sharpen what's already on the page. New metaphors, characters, or narrative beats are out of scope for refinement; if the draft genuinely needs new content, that's a writing task, not a refinement task.
- Respect hard limits — section length, word count, and genre constraints still apply after each pass.
- Respect override preferences — if the user's lyric-writing-guide.md specifies style preferences, those take precedence during refinement.
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Override Support
Check for custom lyric writing preferences:
Loading Override
1. Call load_override("lyric-writing-guide.md") — returns override content if found (auto-resolves path from config) 2. If found: read and incorporate as additional context 3. If not found: use base guidelines only
Override File Format
`{overrides}/lyric-writing-guide.md`:
# Lyric Writing Guide
## Style Preferences
- Prefer first-person narrative
- Avoid religious imagery
- Use vivid sensory details
- Keep verses 4-6 lines max
## Vocabulary
- Avoid: utilize, commence, endeavor (too formal)
- Prefer: simple, direct language
## Themes
- Focus on: technology, alienation, urban decay
- Avoid: love songs, party anthems
## Custom Rules
- Never use the word "baby" in lyrics
- Avoid clichés: "heart of gold", "burning bright"How to Use Override
1. Load at invocation start 2. Use as additional context when writing lyrics 3. Apply preferences alongside base principles 4. Override preferences take precedence if conflicting
Example:
- Base says: "Show don't tell"
- Override says: "Prefer first-person narrative"
- Result: Show emotion through first-person actions/observations
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Prosody (Syllable Stress)
Prosody is matching stressed syllables to strong musical beats.
Rules:
- Stressed syllables land on downbeats (beats 1 and 3)
- Multi-syllable words need natural emphasis: HAP-py, not hap-PY
- High melody notes = emphasized words
Test: Speak the lyric. If emphasis feels wrong, rewrite it.
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Rhyme Techniques
See craft-reference.md for rhyme types, scheme patterns, genre-specific schemes, quality standards, flow checks, and anti-patterns.
Show Don't Tell
ACTION - What would someone DO feeling this emotion?
- ❌ "My heart is breaking"
- ✅ "She fell to her knees as he packed his bag"
IMAGERY - Nouns that can be seen/touched
- ❌ "I felt so sad"
- ✅ "Coffee gone cold on the counter"
SENSORY DETAIL - Engage multiple senses
- Sight, sound, smell, touch, taste, organic (body), kinesthetic (motion)
Section balance: Verses = sensory details. Choruses = emotional statements.
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Verse/Chorus Contrast
| Element | Verse | Chorus |
|---|---|---|
| Lyrics | Observational, narrative | Emotional, universal |
| Energy | Building | Peak |
| Detail | Specific sensory | Abstract emotional |
No Verse-Chorus Echo
A verse must never repeat a key phrase, image, or rhyme word that appears in the chorus it leads into. The chorus is the hook — if the verse already said it, the chorus loses its impact.
What to check — before finalizing any track, compare: 1. The last 2 lines of every verse/section that precedes a chorus 2. The first 2 lines of the chorus
Flag any of these overlaps:
- Exact phrase: Same words appear in both (e.g., "digital heart" / "digital heart")
- Same rhyme word: Verse ends on "start," chorus opens on "start"
- Restated hook: Verse paraphrases the chorus hook in different words
- Shared imagery: Verse uses the chorus's signature image (e.g., both say "warehouse")
Red flags:
- Last line of verse contains ANY phrase from the chorus first line
- A signature chorus word (the hook word) appears anywhere in the preceding verse
- The verse "gives away" the chorus before it hits
Fix: 1. Rewrite the verse line to use DIFFERENT imagery that SETS UP the chorus 2. The verse should create tension or expectation — the chorus resolves it 3. Complementary, not redundant: verse says "spark," chorus says "start"
Scope: This applies to EVERY verse-to-chorus transition in the track, not just the first one. Check all of them. Also check bridge-to-chorus transitions.
Example:
Bad:
This is where the future of tech TV got its start.
[Chorus] Five-three-five York Street — where the future got its start,
Good:
This is where it all began, the very first spark.
[Chorus] Five-three-five York Street — where the future got its start,
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Hook & Title Placement
- Title in first or last line of chorus
- Repeat title at song's beginning AND end
- Give title priority: rhythmic accent, melodic peak
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Line Length, Song Length & Section Limits
See craft-reference.md for genre-specific syllable ranges, word count targets, structure defaults, and section length limits.
Lyric Density & Pacing
See craft-reference.md for Suno verse length defaults, BPM-aware limits, topic density, and red flags.
Point of View & Tense
POV: Choose one and maintain it
- First (I/me) - most intimate
- Second (you) - draws listener in
- Third (he/she/they) - storyteller distance
Tense: Stay consistent within sections
- Present - immediate, powerful
- Past - distance, reflection
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Lyric Pitfalls Checklist
Before finalizing:
- [ ] Forced emphasis (stressed syllables on wrong beats)
- [ ] Inverted word order for rhyme
- [ ] Predictable rhymes (moon/June, fire/desire)
- [ ] Pronoun inconsistency
- [ ] Tense jumping without reason
- [ ] Too specific (alienating names/places)
- [ ] Too vague (abstractions without imagery)
- [ ] Twin verses (V2 = V1 reworded — V2 must advance the story, deepen emotion, or shift perspective, not just rephrase V1. Example: V1 "Streets are cold, I walk alone" → bad V2 "Roads are freezing, I'm by myself" (same idea reworded) → good V2 "Found your old coat in the closet / Still smells like smoke and home" (new detail, emotional shift))
- [ ] No hook
- [ ] Disingenuous voice
- [ ] Section too long for genre (check Section Length Limits table)
- [ ] Orphan lines (line should rhyme with a partner per genre scheme but doesn't)
- [ ] Wrong rhyme scheme for genre (e.g., AABB couplets in a folk ballad)
- [ ] Filler phrases padding lines for rhyme or quote setup
- [ ] Inconsistent syllable counts within a verse (tolerance varies by genre)
- [ ] Verse exceeds Suno line limit for genre (check genre README's Density/pacing default)
- [ ] 8-line verse at BPM under 100 (too dense for Suno — split or trim)
- [ ] Too many proper nouns in a single verse (max 3 introductions per verse)
- [ ] Density mismatch (Musical Direction says "laid back" but verses are packed)
- [ ] Verse-chorus echo (verse repeats chorus phrase, rhyme word, hook, or signature imagery)
- [ ] Invented contractions (signal'd, TV'd — Suno only handles standard pronoun/auxiliary contractions)
- [ ] Pronunciation table not enforced (word in table but standard spelling in Suno lyrics)
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Pronunciation
Always use phonetic spelling for tricky words:
| Type | Example | Write As |
|---|---|---|
| Names | Ramos, Sinaloa | Rah-mohs, Sin-ah-lo-ah |
| Acronyms | GPS, FBI | G-P-S, F-B-I |
| Tech terms | Linux, SQL | Lin-ucks, sequel |
| Numbers | ninety-three | '93 |
| Homographs | live (verb) | lyve or liv |
Homograph Handling (Suno Pronunciation)
Suno renders pronunciation literally from spelling alone — context cues are invisible to the model. Every homograph in the lyrics needs an explicit user decision recorded in the Pronunciation Notes table, then applied as phonetic spelling in the Suno Lyrics Box only.
Why this matters: Even when a sentence makes the intended reading obvious to a human reader, Suno's TTS picks one pronunciation and locks it in. Wrong choice → wrong vocal line on every regen.
Workflow across skills:
lyric-writer (FLAGS) → pronunciation-specialist (RESOLVES) → lyric-reviewer (VERIFIES)Your role as writer — flag, batch-ask, apply: 1. Identify: Flag every homograph in the lyrics during phonetic review (use the table below as a baseline; it is not exhaustive). 2. Batch-ask: When a track contains multiple homographs, present them in a single user message — numbered list with both pronunciation options per word — and accept all decisions in one user reply. Per-word back-and-forth balloons the conversation and breaks flow. 3. Apply: Replace with phonetic spelling in Suno lyric lines only. Streaming/distributor lyrics keep standard English spelling. 4. Document: Add each resolved homograph to the track's Pronunciation Notes table with the user's chosen reading.
The pronunciation-specialist resolves complex cases (regional accents, character voices, dialect markers). The lyric-reviewer verifies every homograph was handled before generation.
Common homographs — every one needs an explicit user decision: (Canonical homograph reference: `${CLAUDE_PLUGIN_ROOT}/reference/suno/pronunciation-guide.md`. Keep this table in sync.)
| Word | Pronunciation A | Phonetic | Pronunciation B | Phonetic |
|---|---|---|---|---|
| live | real-time/broadcast | lyve | reside/exist | live |
| read | present tense | reed | past tense | red |
| lead | to guide | leed | metal | led |
| wound | injury | woond | past of wind | wownd |
| close | to shut | kloze | nearby | klohs |
| bass | low sound | bayss | the fish | bas |
| tear | from crying | teer | to rip | tare |
| wind | air movement | wihnd | to turn | wynd |
Rules:
- Every homograph in the phonetic checklist must trace to a recorded user decision in the Pronunciation Notes table — "context clear" is not a valid resolution.
- The user is the only authority on which pronunciation is intended. Ask when in doubt; treat ambiguity as a flag, not a judgment call.
- Phonetic spellings live in the Suno Lyrics Box only. Streaming/distributor lyrics use standard English.
- Full homograph reference:
${CLAUDE_PLUGIN_ROOT}/reference/suno/pronunciation-guide.md
No Invented Contractions (Suno)
Suno only recognizes standard English contractions. Never use made-up contractions by appending 'd, 'll, etc. to nouns, brand names, or non-standard words.
Standard (OK for Suno): they'd, he'd, you'd, she'd, we'd, I'd, wouldn't, couldn't, shouldn't
Invented (will break Suno): signal'd, TV'd, network'd, podcast'd, channel'd
Fix: Spell it out — "signal would" not "signal'd", "TV could" not "TV'd"
Rule: If the base word isn't a pronoun or standard auxiliary verb, don't contract it. Suno will mispronounce or skip invented contractions.
Pronunciation Table Enforcement (Suno)
Every entry in a track's Pronunciation Notes table MUST be applied as phonetic spelling in the Suno lyric lines. The pronunciation table is not documentation — it is a checklist of required substitutions.
Process (before finalizing any track for Suno generation): 1. Read the track's Pronunciation Notes table top to bottom 2. For EACH entry, search the Suno lyrics for the standard spelling 3. If found, replace with the phonetic spelling 4. If the phonetic is already applied, confirm it matches the table
Verification format — update the Phonetic Review Checklist:
- ❌
"Potrero" in pronunciation table but "Potrero" in Suno lyrics— FAIL - ✅
"poh-TREH-roh" in Suno lyrics matches pronunciation table— PASS
Rules:
- The pronunciation table is the source of truth for Suno spelling. Every entry must appear as its phonetic form in the Suno Lyrics Box.
- Every Suno lyric line that contains a tabled word uses the phonetic spelling — every verse, every chorus repeat, every bridge.
- Phonetics belong in the Suno Lyrics Box only; streaming lyrics keep standard spelling.
- When uncertain whether a word needs phonetic treatment, ask the user — better to flag and confirm than ship a guess.
Common failures:
- Word added to pronunciation table during track creation but never applied to lyrics
- Phonetic applied in one verse but missed in another (chorus repeat, bridge)
- New lyric edit introduces a word that's already in the table but isn't phonetic
Anti-pattern:
WRONG: Pronunciation Table: Potrero → poh-TREH-roh
Suno Lyrics: "Potrero Hill, industrial..."
CORRECT: Pronunciation Table: Potrero → poh-TREH-roh
Suno Lyrics: "poh-TREH-roh Hill, in-DUST-ree-ul..."---
Documentary Standards
For true crime/documentary tracks, see documentary-standards.md.
The Five Rules: 1. Third-person narrator only — render the story from outside the subject; the narrator describes, not impersonates. 2. Quote only what's in the source record — verbatim, with citation. Anything in quotation marks must be traceable to testimony, transcript, or recorded statement. 3. Internal states require testimony — render thoughts, feelings, or motivations only when a source (interview, statement, court record) supports them. 4. Actions must be in the record — render only events that appear in the source material; no invented beats, no implied scenes. 5. Confine factual claims to what sources affirm — absence of evidence is not a claim. "Nobody saw" needs a source asserting that, not a gap in the record.
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Cross-Track Referencing (Concept Albums)
When to Activate
Activate when all of these are true:
- Album type is Narrative, Thematic, Character Study, Documentary, or OST
- Current track number is > 1 (track 01 establishes — it doesn't reference)
Process
1. Read album context: Album README → Concept, Structure, Motifs & Threads sections 2. Read previous tracks: Tracks 1 through N-1 (lyrics, concept, cross-references) 3. Identify 1–3 callback opportunities: Look for lyrical images, phrases, character moments, or thematic threads that can be echoed, inverted, or resolved 4. Draft with references woven in: Integrate naturally — the reference should feel like part of this track, not a footnote 5. Document: Update the track's Cross-References section AND the album's Motifs & Threads table
Reference Density by Album Position
| Position | Target References | Rationale |
|---|---|---|
| Track 01 | 0 | Establishes motifs — nothing to reference yet |
| Tracks 02–04 (early) | 1–2 | Light callbacks; building the vocabulary |
| Tracks 05–08 (mid) | 2–3 | Weaving threads together; peak density |
| Final 1–2 tracks | 2–4 | Resolving threads; bookend with track 01 |
Reference Types
| Type | What It Does | Example |
|---|---|---|
| Callback | Echoes an earlier lyric or image in new context | Track 01: "the door was red" → Track 07: "red doors don't open twice" |
| Motif | Recurring thematic element that gains meaning | "static" appearing across tracks as technology fails |
| Character thread | Same character reappears or is referenced | Track 03 introduces a witness; Track 08 shows their testimony |
| Contrast/Inversion | Deliberately flips an earlier idea | Track 02: "the signal's strong" → Track 09: "nothing but noise" |
| Resolution | Resolves tension or question from earlier track | Track 04 asks "who called the cops?" → Track 11 answers it |
Quality Rules
- Subtle over heavy — a single echoed image beats a quoted line. The listener should feel the connection, not be hit with it.
- New context required — a callback must mean something different in its new location. Same phrase, same meaning = lazy repetition, not a callback.
- Don't force it — if no natural callback opportunity exists, write the track without one. Forced references hurt worse than no references.
- Bookend rule — the final track should echo at least one element from track 01, creating a sense of closure.
- Track must stand alone first — every track must work as a complete song without the callbacks. References are a bonus layer, not a crutch.
Anti-Patterns
- ❌ Quoting whole lines from earlier tracks verbatim (lazy — transform the reference)
- ❌ Forward references to tracks not yet written (breaks the writing flow; only backward references)
- ❌ Referencing every previous track in a single song (overwhelming — pick 1–3 strongest connections)
- ❌ Making the callback the hook or chorus (callbacks belong in verses/bridges — the hook should stand alone)
- ❌ Explaining the reference in the lyrics ("just like track three said…")
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Working On a Track
When asked to work on a track, immediately scan for:
- Weak/awkward lines, forced rhymes
- Prosody problems
- POV or tense inconsistencies
- Twin verses
- Missing hook or buried title
- Factual inaccuracies
- Pronunciation risks
Report all issues with proposed fixes, then proceed.
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Workflow
As the lyric writer, you: 1. Receive track concept - From album-conceptualizer or user 1.5. Load album context - (Concept albums only) Read album README and previous tracks for cross-referencing opportunities. See "Cross-Track Referencing" section. 2. Draft initial lyrics - Apply core principles, weaving in callbacks where appropriate 3. Run quality checks - Verify rhyme, POV, tense, structure (13-point check) 3.5. Run refinement passes - Default: 1 pass. Tighten, strengthen, polish. See "Iterative Refinement Passes" section. 4. Scan for pronunciation risks - Check proper nouns, homographs 5. Apply phonetic fixes - Replace risky words 6. Verify against sources - If documentary track 7. Finalize lyrics - Update Lyrics Box, Streaming Lyrics, Cross-References, and Motifs & Threads table (concept albums) 8. Hand off to Suno engineer - Automatically invoke /bitwize-music:suno-engineer with the track file path to populate the Style Box and Suno Inputs section. Do not wait for the user to request this — it is the natural next step after lyrics are finalized.
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Remember
1. Load override first - Call load_override("lyric-writing-guide.md") at invocation. Why: the user's vocabulary preferences, theme avoidances, and custom rules outrank base craft guidelines and must be in context before the first line is drafted. 2. Watch your rhymes - No self-rhymes, no lazy patterns 3. Prosody matters - Stressed syllables on strong beats 4. Show don't tell - Action, imagery, sensory detail 5. V2 ≠ V1 - Second verse must develop, not twin 6. Pronunciation is critical - Phonetic spelling for risky words 7. Documentary = legal risk - Follow the five rules 8. Apply user preferences - Override guide preferences take precedence 9. Concept albums connect - Read previous tracks, weave 1–3 callbacks, update Motifs & Threads table 10. Refine before presenting - Run refinement passes (default: 1), show Refinement Log with before→after for each change
Your deliverable: Polished lyrics with proper prosody, clear pronunciation, factual accuracy (if documentary), and completed Suno style prompt (via auto-invoked suno-engineer).
Lyric Writer Craft Reference
Detailed tables and reference data for the lyric-writer skill. Read by the lyric-writer when specific craft guidance is needed.
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Rhyme Techniques
Rhyme Types (use variety)
| Type | Description | Example |
|---|---|---|
| Perfect | Exact match | love/dove |
| Slant/Near | Similar but not exact | love/move |
| Consonance | Same ending consonants | blank/think |
| Assonance | Same vowel sounds | lake/fate |
| Internal | Rhymes within a line | "fire and desire higher" |
Rhyme Scheme Patterns
| Pattern | Effect |
|---|---|
| AABB | Stable, immediate resolution |
| ABAB | Classic, delayed resolution |
| ABCB | Lighter, less pressure |
| AAAX | Strong setup, surprise ending |
Rhyme Schemes by Genre — Quick Reference
There is no universal default. Each genre has its own conventions documented in genres/[genre]/README.md under "Lyric Conventions." Always read the genre README before writing.
| Genre Family | Default Scheme | Rhyme Strictness | Key Difference |
|---|---|---|---|
| Hip-Hop / Rap | AABB (couplet) | High — multisyllabic + internal rhyme mandatory | Rhyme density throughout the bar, not just end rhymes |
| Pop | XAXA (conversational) | Low — near rhymes preferred | Conversational phrasing; if it sounds "crafted," it fails |
| Rock | XAXA or ABAB | Low — meaning > rhyme | Imagery and emotional energy over technical rhyming |
| Punk | AABB (loose) | Low — half-rhymes authentic | Directness, shoutable, works at 150+ BPM |
| Metal | Optional | Very low — can skip entirely | Concrete imagery and riff alignment over rhyme |
| Country / Folk | ABCB (ballad stanza) | Moderate — near rhymes OK | Storytelling; lines 2 & 4 rhyme, 1 & 3 free |
| Blues | AAB (3-line form) | Moderate | Line 1 stated, line 2 repeats, line 3 resolves |
| Electronic / EDM | Repetition > rhyme | Minimal | Less is more; single phrases looped, not verses |
| Ambient / Lo-Fi | None | None | Vocals are texture, not content |
| Trip-Hop | XAXA (loose) | Low | Most lyrical electronic genre; abstract, moody |
| R&B / Soul | Flexible | Low — emotion first | Leave space for melisma and vocal runs |
| Funk | Minimal | Very low | Groove lock; lyrics accent the downbeat |
| Gospel | Repetitive build | Low | Call-and-response; repetition builds intensity |
| Jazz | AABA (32-bar) | Sophisticated | Internal rhyme, wordplay; phrasing behind/ahead of beat |
| Reggae / Dancehall | Riddim-driven | Moderate | Groove lock; audience participation by design |
| Afrobeats | Call-and-response | Low | Code-switching (English/Pidgin/local languages) |
| Ballad (any) | ABCB or ABAB | Moderate | Emotion and narrative serve the story |
How to use: Before writing lyrics, read genres/[genre]/README.md → "Lyric Conventions" section for the specific genre's rules on rhyme scheme, rhyme quality, verse structure, and what to avoid.
Rhyme Quality Standards (All Genres)
These apply universally regardless of genre:
- Forced rhymes are NEVER acceptable — never bend grammar, invent words, or use filler phrases just to land a rhyme
- No self-rhymes — never rhyme a word with itself
- No lazy repeats — avoid rhyming near-identical words (mind/mind, time/time)
- Meaning over rhyme — if a perfect rhyme sounds unnatural, use a near rhyme or restructure the line
- Consistency within sections — whatever rhyme scheme you choose, maintain it through the section. No random switching mid-verse.
Flow Checks (All Genres)
Before finalizing any lyrics, verify: 1. Read each rhyming pair aloud — do the end words actually rhyme (per genre expectations)? 2. Are there any orphan lines that should rhyme with something but don't? 3. Is syllable count roughly consistent across corresponding lines? (see tolerance in Line Length table) 4. Are there filler phrases ("spoke the words", "you know what I mean") padding lines? 5. Do quoted/paraphrased lines come from sourced material (for documentary albums)? 6. Does the rhyme scheme match the genre? (Don't use AABB couplets for a folk ballad, don't use ABCB for hip-hop) 7. Say the lyrics without melody as plain prose — do they sound natural for the genre's vocal style?
Common Anti-Patterns (All Genres)
- ❌ Using the wrong rhyme scheme for the genre (hip-hop couplets in a folk song, etc.)
- ❌ Forcing perfect rhymes where near rhymes sound more natural
- ❌ Using filler lines to set up quotes ("he stood up and spoke the words")
- ❌ Inventing fake quotes for real people when source quotes exist
- ❌ Ending a verse on a line that doesn't connect to its rhyme partner
- ❌ Inconsistent line lengths that break the vocal pocket
- ❌ Cliché phrases: "cold as ice," "broke my heart," "by my side," "set me free," "tonight" (at line endings), "learning to fly"
- ❌ Telling instead of showing ("I was angry" vs. showing anger through imagery)
- ❌ Generic abstractions when specificity would serve better
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Line Length
General Ranges by Genre
| Genre | Syllables/Line | Tolerance |
|---|---|---|
| Pop/Folk/Punk | 6-8 | ±2 |
| Rock/Indie | 8-10 | ±2 |
| Hip-Hop/Rap | 10-13+ | ±3 |
| Metal/Electronic | Varies | Flexible |
Critical: Verse 1 line lengths must match Verse 2 line lengths.
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Song Length
Songs that are too long (800+ words) cause Suno to rush, compress sections, or skip lyrics. Songs that are too short produce tracks under 3 minutes — fine if intentional, but usually not what users want.
Default Target Duration
3:30–5:00 minutes for all genres unless the user specifies otherwise. This is the standard range for streaming platforms and what listeners expect.
Album/Track Duration Override
When a track has a Target Duration in its Track Details table (not —), use that instead of the genre default. When the track shows —, check the album README's Target Duration in Suno Settings. If both are absent, use the genre defaults below.
Duration → Word Count mapping:
| Target Duration | Non-Hip-Hop Words | Hip-Hop Words |
|---|---|---|
| 2:00–2:30 | 120–180 | 200–300 |
| 2:30–3:30 | 150–250 | 250–400 |
| 3:30–5:00 | 220–400 | 400–600 |
| 5:00–7:00 | 350–500 | 550–750 |
Add ~30 words per instrumental break/solo when estimating.
Word Count Targets by Genre (Suno)
These targets produce tracks in the 3:30–5:00 range on Suno. The previous lower targets (e.g., 150 words for electronic) produce 2:00–2:30 tracks.
| Genre | Target Duration | Word Count | Structure |
|---|---|---|---|
| Electronic / Synthwave / EDM | 3:30–5:00 | 220–300 | 3 verses + pre-chorus + chorus + bridge + instrumental break |
| Pop / Synth-Pop | 3:30–4:30 | 250–350 | 2–3 verses + pre-chorus + chorus + bridge |
| Rock / Alt-Rock | 3:30–5:00 | 250–400 | 2–3 verses + chorus + bridge |
| Hip-Hop / Rap | 3:30–5:00 | 400–600 | 3 verses + hook + bridge |
| Folk / Country | 3:30–5:00 | 250–400 | 3 verses + chorus + bridge |
| Ballad (any) | 3:30–5:00 | 200–300 | 2–3 verses + chorus + bridge (slower tempo = fewer words) |
| Punk / Pop-Punk | 2:30–3:30 | 150–250 | 2 verses + chorus + bridge (punk is short by design) |
Instrumental Tags Count as Runtime
Suno instrumental tags ([Instrumental Break], [Synth Solo], [Guitar Solo], [Drop], [Interlude], etc.) add approximately 20–40 seconds each to the track. Factor these into duration estimates. A track with 220 words + 2 instrumental breaks will run longer than 220 words alone.
Structure Defaults
- Default: 2–3 verses + chorus + bridge. Use 3 verses to hit duration targets.
- Chorus: 4–6 lines, repeated verbatim — not rewritten each time.
- Bridge: 2–4 lines.
- Pre-chorus: 2–4 lines. Adding a pre-chorus is an effective way to increase duration without bloating sections.
- Outro: Optional, 2–4 lines max. Not a new verse.
- Instrumental breaks: Use
[Instrumental Break],[Synth Solo], etc. to add runtime without more words.
How to Hit Duration Targets
Add more sections, not longer sections. Per-section maximums (see Section Length Limits below) are correct for Suno pacing. The way to reach 3:30+ is:
- Add a 3rd verse (most effective)
- Add a pre-chorus before each chorus
- Add an instrumental break or solo
- Add a bridge if missing
Do NOT write 10-line verses or 8-line choruses — Suno will rush them.
Length Limits
- If draft exceeds 400 words (non-hip-hop) or 600 words (hip-hop): Cut it down before presenting.
- If draft is under 200 words: Flag as "likely too short for target duration (3:30–5:00)" — suggest adding sections.
- Count words after drafting. If over target, remove a verse or trim sections — don't just shorten lines. If under target, add a verse, pre-chorus, or instrumental break.
Section Length Limits by Genre
Why this matters: Suno rushes, compresses, or skips content when sections are too long. These are hard limits — trim before presenting.
Hip-Hop / Rap / Trap / Drill / Grime / Phonk / Nerdcore
| Section | Max Lines | Notes |
|---|---|---|
| Verse | 8 | Standard 16-bar verse (each written line ≈ 2 bars) |
| Chorus / Hook | 4–6 | Shorter hooks hit harder |
| Bridge | 4–6 | |
| Pre-Chorus | 2–4 | |
| Outro | 2–4 | Spoken word / ad-lib sections exempt from limit |
Pop / Synth-Pop / Dance-Pop / K-Pop / Piano Pop
| Section | Max Lines | Notes |
|---|---|---|
| Verse | 6–8 | |
| Chorus | 4–6 | |
| Bridge | 4 | |
| Pre-Chorus | 2–4 |
Rock / Alt-Rock / Indie Rock / Grunge / Garage Rock / Post-Rock / Prog Rock
| Section | Max Lines | Notes |
|---|---|---|
| Verse | 6–8 | |
| Chorus | 4–6 | |
| Bridge | 4 | |
| Pre-Chorus | 2–4 | |
| Guitar solo / Interlude | 0 (instrumental) | Use [Guitar Solo] or [Interlude] tag |
Punk / Hardcore Punk / Emo / Pop-Punk / Ska Punk
| Section | Max Lines | Notes |
|---|---|---|
| Verse | 4–6 | Short, fast — keep it tight |
| Chorus | 2–4 | Punchy, shoutable |
| Bridge | 2–4 | |
| Pre-Chorus | 2 |
Metal / Thrash / Doom / Black Metal / Metalcore / Industrial
| Section | Max Lines | Notes |
|---|---|---|
| Verse | 4–8 | |
| Chorus | 4–6 | |
| Bridge | 4 | |
| Pre-Chorus | 2–4 | |
| Breakdown | 2–4 | Often instrumental or minimal lyrics |
Country / Folk / Americana / Bluegrass / Singer-Songwriter / Blues
| Section | Max Lines | Notes |
|---|---|---|
| Verse | 4–8 | Storytelling verses can use the full 8 |
| Chorus | 4–6 | |
| Bridge | 2–4 | |
| Pre-Chorus | 2–4 |
Electronic / EDM / House / Techno / Trance / Dubstep / DnB / Synthwave
| Section | Max Lines | Notes |
|---|---|---|
| Verse | 4–6 | Vocals are sparse in electronic — less is more |
| Chorus / Hook | 2–4 | Often just a repeated phrase |
| Bridge | 2–4 | |
| Drop | 0 (instrumental) | Use [Drop] or [Break] tag |
Ambient / Lo-Fi / Chillwave / Trip-Hop / Vaporwave
| Section | Max Lines | Notes |
|---|---|---|
| Verse | 2–4 | Minimal vocals, atmosphere first |
| Chorus / Hook | 2–4 | |
| Bridge | 2 |
R&B / Soul / Funk / Gospel
| Section | Max Lines | Notes |
|---|---|---|
| Verse | 6–8 | |
| Chorus | 4–6 | |
| Bridge | 4 | |
| Pre-Chorus | 2–4 | |
| Vamp / Ad-lib | Flexible | Outro vamps are genre-standard |
Jazz / Swing / Bossa Nova
| Section | Max Lines | Notes |
|---|---|---|
| Verse | 4–8 | Standard 32-bar form |
| Chorus | 4–6 | |
| Bridge | 4–8 | Jazz B-sections can run longer |
Reggae / Dancehall / Afrobeats
| Section | Max Lines | Notes |
|---|---|---|
| Verse | 4–8 | |
| Chorus / Hook | 4–6 | |
| Bridge | 2–4 | |
| Toast / DJ | 4–8 | Dancehall toasting sections |
Ballad (any genre)
| Section | Max Lines | Notes |
|---|---|---|
| Verse | 4–6 | Slower tempo = fewer lines needed |
| Chorus | 4–6 | |
| Bridge | 2–4 |
Section Length Enforcement
Hard rules — enforce before presenting lyrics:
1. Count lines per section after drafting. Compare against genre table above. 2. If a section exceeds its max: Trim it. Don't ask — cut it down, then present. 3. Hip-hop verse over 8 lines: Split into two verses or cut. No exceptions. 4. Any chorus over 6 lines: Trim. A long chorus loses its punch and causes Suno to rush. 5. Electronic verse over 6 lines: Cut. Electronic tracks need space, not walls of text. 6. Punk sections over limits: Punk is short and fast. If it's long, it's not punk. 7. When unsure about genre: Use the Pop/Rock defaults (6–8 verse, 4–6 chorus, 4 bridge). 8. Also check BPM-aware limits in the Lyric Density & Pacing section below — a genre may allow 8-line verses at fast tempo but only 4 at slow tempo.
Suno-specific reasoning: Long sections cause:
- Vocal rushing (cramming words into fixed musical time)
- Loss of clarity (words blur together)
- Section compression (Suno shortens the music to fit)
- Skipped lyrics (Suno drops lines entirely)
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Lyric Density & Pacing (Suno)
Suno rushes through dense verse blocks. Verse length must match tempo and feel. The slower the BPM, the fewer lines Suno can handle without rushing, compressing, or skipping.
Genre-specific Suno verse limits are in each genre's README under "Lyric Conventions → Density/pacing (Suno)". Always check the genre README for the track you're writing.
Suno Verse Length Defaults
| Genre Family | Default Lines/Verse | Max Safe | Topics/Verse | Key Rule |
|---|---|---|---|---|
| Hip-Hop / Rap | 8 (4 couplets) | 8 | 2-3 | Never exceed 8; half-time trap = treat as 65-75 BPM |
| Pop | 4 | 6-8 | 1-2 | Chorus-first — longer verses bury the hook |
| Rock | 6 | 8 | 2 | 120 BPM sweet spot; guitar riffs need space |
| Punk | 4 | 4 | 1 | Fast, short, every word punches |
| Hardcore Punk | 2-3 | 3 | 1 | Extreme tempo; shouted, minimal |
| Metal | 6-8 | 10 | 2-3 | Vocal delivery compresses syllables; thrash handles most |
| Doom Metal | 4 | 6 | 1 | Slowest metal; each word carries crushing weight |
| Country / Folk | 6 | 8 | 1-2 | Storytelling pace; ballads drop to 4 |
| Blues | 3 (AAB) | 3 | 1 | Rigid structure — never break AAB |
| Electronic / EDM | 2-4 | 4 | 1 | Production is the star; vocals are texture |
| Ambient / Shoegaze | 0-2 | 4 | 1 | Often instrumental; vocals are texture |
| R&B / Soul | 6 | 8 | 1-2 | Melisma stretches syllables; groove > density |
| Jazz | 6-8 | 8 | 1-2 | Bebop: 2-4 lines; ballads: 6-8 |
| Singer-Songwriter | 6-8 | 8 | 2-3 | Confessional; stripped-back production carries words |
| Progressive Rock | 8-10 | 12 | 3-4 | The exception — handles long verses |
BPM-Aware Limits (Universal Fallback)
When a genre README doesn't specify, use this table:
| BPM Range | Max Lines/Verse | Topics/Verse | Feel |
|---|---|---|---|
| < 80 | 4 | 1-2 | Slow, heavy — fewer lines needed |
| 80-94 | 4-6 | 1-2 | Laid back, mid-tempo |
| 94-110 | 6 | 2-3 | Energetic, driving |
| 110-140 | 6-8 | 2-3 | Standard rock/pop range |
| 140+ | 4 | 1 | Fast — short verses, energy over density |
Default: 4 lines per verse unless the genre and tempo justify more.
Topic Density
- Max 1-2 topics per 4-line verse, 2-3 per 6-8 line verse
- If a verse covers 3+ topics in 4 lines, split it
- Prefer more short verses over fewer dense verses — two 4-line verses beat one 8-line verse
Red Flags
- 8-line verse at any BPM under 100 — too dense for Suno
- Verse reads like a list of names/facts — it's a Wikipedia entry, not a verse
- Track concept says "laid back" but verses are wall-to-wall syllables
- More than 3 proper nouns introduced in a single verse
- Every verse in the song is dense (no breathing room anywhere)
Fix
When a verse is too dense: 1. Prefer adding a verse over cutting content (spread, don't compress) 2. Let each topic have at least a full couplet (2 lines) to land 3. Re-read with the BPM in mind — can you actually sing/rap this at tempo without rushing?
Streaming Exception
Streaming lyrics (distributor text) can have longer verse blocks since they aren't generated by Suno. But verse BREAKS should still align with the Suno structure so the text matches what's actually sung.
Process
Before finalizing any track, ASK: "Does the verse length match the BPM and mood described in Musical Direction?" Check the genre README's Density/pacing (Suno) line. If the verse exceeds the default, flag it to the user.
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Refinement Pass Reference
Three-pass schedule for iterative lyric refinement. Each pass targets a different layer.
Pass 1: Tighten
Remove filler, compress language, eliminate redundancy.
| Pattern | Before | After | Why |
|---|---|---|---|
| Filler phrases | "He stood up and spoke the words" | "He said" | Setup phrases pad lines without adding meaning |
| Redundant modifiers | "completely destroyed" | "destroyed" | Absolute verbs don't need intensifiers |
| Passive voice | "The door was opened by her" | "She opened the door" | Active voice is more direct and singable |
| Pronoun-heavy lines | "He told him that he should go" | "Get out — the message clear" | Ambiguous pronouns weaken imagery |
| Unnecessary prepositions | "She looked up at the sky above" | "She searched the sky" | Trim directional padding |
| Throat-clearing openers | "Well, I think that maybe I should" | "I should" | Cut hedging — commit to the statement |
| Double-saying | "alone and by myself" | "alone" | One expression per idea |
Pass 2: Strengthen
Upgrade weak imagery, sharpen sensory detail, replace generic with specific.
| Pattern | Before | After | Why |
|---|---|---|---|
| Generic imagery | "The city at night" | "Neon bleeding on wet asphalt" | Specific images stick; generic ones slide |
| Abstract emotion | "I felt so lost" | "Couldn't find my keys, my name, my street" | Show the feeling through concrete details |
| Clichés | "Cold as ice" | "Cold as a landlord's smile" | Fresh comparisons earn attention |
| Single-sense lines | "The room was dark" (sight only) | "Dark — just the hum of pipes and mildew air" | Multi-sensory lines immerse the listener |
| Weak verbs | "He went across the room" | "He cut across the room" | Strong verbs carry energy and specificity |
| Telling emotions | "She was angry" | "Her knuckles white around the glass" | Action reveals emotion without naming it |
| Vague quantities | "A lot of people came" | "Thirty faces in a room for ten" | Numbers create instant visual scale |
Pass 3: Flow & Ear
Read-aloud test, smooth transitions, singability at target BPM.
| Pattern | Before | After | Why |
|---|---|---|---|
| Consonant clusters | "Sixth street's strict structures" | "Sixth Street's sharp edges" | Tongue-trippers kill vocal delivery |
| Unsingable vowel sequences | "She oughta allow our hour" | "She gave us the hour" | Stacked diphthongs muddy at tempo |
| Transition bumps | V1 ends reflective → V2 opens aggressive (no bridge) | Add pre-chorus or transitional line | Jarring shifts break the listener's flow |
| Missing breath points | 12-syllable line with no natural pause | Split at caesura or add a comma break | Singers need air; dense lines get rushed |
| Stress misalignment | "into the DARK-ness" on a weak beat | "the DARKness CALLS" on strong beats | Stressed syllables must land on downbeats |
| Choppy rhythm | "Stop. Go. Wait. No. Run." | "Stop and go — wait, no — run" | Staccato lines need connective tissue to sing |
| Syllable mismatch | V1 line: 8 syllables, V2 line: 13 syllables | Match within ±2 syllables | Parallel lines should fit the same melodic phrase |
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Documentary & True Crime Legal Standards
Legal guidelines for writing lyrics about real people and events.
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When to Apply These Standards
Apply documentary legal standards for:
- True crime albums (criminal cases, trials, investigations)
- Documentary storytelling (real events, real people)
- Biographical work (artist profiles of real people)
- Historical narratives (factual events from history)
- Any work citing sources (if RESEARCH.md or SOURCES.md exists)
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Core Legal Principles
The Five Rules: 1. No impersonation - Use third-person narrator voice only, never speak AS the person 2. No fabricated quotes - Never put words in quotes unless documented in sources 3. No internal state claims - Never claim to know what someone thought, felt, believed, or feared 4. No speculative actions - Stick to documented events, don't invent daily activities 5. No negative factual claims - Don't claim "nobody saw" or "nobody heard" (can't prove negatives)
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What to AVOID (High Risk)
Internal State Claims
- ❌ "She was afraid"
- ❌ "He felt angry"
- ❌ "She believed him"
- ❌ "He knew it was wrong"
- ❌ "She wanted to escape"
- ❌ "Living in fear"
- ❌ "Tried to disappear"
- ❌ "Can't believe what's real"
- ❌ "Didn't know where to go"
Fabricated Quotes
- ❌ "I need help," she cried
- ❌ "We'll start the process," they said
- ❌ Direct speech without documented source
Speculative Actions
- ❌ "She finally made the call" (unless documented HOW)
- ❌ "Goes to sleep that night" (undocumented private action)
- ❌ "Waiting for the call" (speculative daily activity)
- ❌ "June 21st she waited" (inventing specific undocumented timeline)
Negative Factual Claims
- ❌ "Nobody heard her scream"
- ❌ "Nobody saw what happened"
- ❌ "No one knew the truth"
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What to USE Instead (Legally Safe)
Pattern-Based Language
- ✅ "The pattern started" (not "first time")
- ✅ "The cycle repeated" (not "second time")
- ✅ "Years of documented abuse" (pattern, not specific incidents)
Observable Behavior
- ✅ "She called 911" (documented action)
- ✅ "Court records show" (attributed to source)
- ✅ "Testimony revealed" (documented in trial)
- ✅ "The walls kept her screams in" (describes situation, not claiming "nobody heard")
Documented Psychiatric/Medical States
- ✅ "Brief reactive psychosis" (diagnosis from doctor)
- ✅ "PTSD confirmed" (documented diagnosis)
- ✅ "Testimony says she lost her mind" (attributed to testimony)
Narrator Description vs. Internal Claims
- ✅ "She asked for protection" (observable, documented)
- ❌ "She felt desperate" (internal state)
- ✅ "Reality hitting hard" (narrator observation of situation)
- ❌ "She couldn't process" (internal mental state)
- ✅ "Four years of violence" (documented pattern)
- ❌ "Four years of hiding" (internal intention)
Timing Without Speculation
- ✅ "Two days before June 23rd" (documented timing)
- ❌ "June 21st she waited, June 22nd still nothing" (speculative daily actions)
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Attribution Techniques
When you need to describe something close to internal state, attribute it to a source:
- ✅ "Doctors diagnosed PTSD"
- ✅ "Testimony revealed years of abuse"
- ✅ "Court records documented the pattern"
- ✅ "She testified 'You hurt me again and again'" (actual quote with attribution)
- ✅ "According to trial testimony" (explicit attribution)
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Before/After Examples
Example 1: Internal State
- ❌ BEFORE: "She was living in dread, trying to survive"
- ✅ AFTER: "Years of documented abuse, the pattern escalating"
Example 2: Fabricated Quote
- ❌ BEFORE: "'I need protection,' she begged"
- ✅ AFTER: "She asked for protection, asked to get away"
Example 3: Speculative Action
- ❌ BEFORE: "She finally made the call, hiding in the bathroom"
- ✅ AFTER: "She reached out for help, contacted the authorities"
Example 4: Negative Claim
- ❌ BEFORE: "Nobody heard her scream, nobody saw"
- ✅ AFTER: "The walls kept her screams in, the world couldn't see within"
Example 5: Pattern vs. Specific
- ❌ BEFORE: "The first time he hit her, the second time worse"
- ✅ AFTER: "The pattern started, the cycle repeated, years of escalation"
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The Documentary Standard
Ask yourself for EVERY line: 1. Can I cite this claim to a specific source? 2. Am I claiming internal knowledge I can't have? 3. Am I inventing quotes or dialogue? 4. Am I speculating about undocumented actions? 5. Am I making negative claims I can't prove?
If the answer to ANY of these is problematic, rewrite the line.
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Why This Matters
Legal issues can:
- Expose you to defamation claims
- Undermine the credibility of the entire work
- Require expensive revisions or takedowns
- Damage your reputation as a documentary artist
The standard: If you can't cite it, don't write it. If you can't prove it, don't claim it. If it's internal, don't assume it.
Lyric Writer Examples
Before/after transformations demonstrating key lyric writing principles.
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Show Don't Tell
Example 1: Heartbreak
Weak (tells the emotion):
I was devastated when she left
My heart was broken, feeling bereft
I couldn't believe that she was gone
I felt so empty and aloneStrong (shows through action and imagery):
Found her coffee mug still in the sink
Poured it out but couldn't watch it drain
Her keys still hanging by the door
I keep forgetting she's not coming backWhy it works: The strong version uses concrete objects (mug, keys, door) and actions (poured, hanging, forgetting) that let listeners feel the emotion without being told what to feel.
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Example 2: Anger
Weak:
I'm so angry at what you did
You made me furious, I must admitStrong:
Threw your picture at the wall
Glass still scattered in the hallWhy it works: Physical action (threw, scattered) conveys anger more powerfully than stating it.
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Prosody (Syllable Stress)
Stressed syllables must land on strong beats (1 and 3 in 4/4 time).
Example 1: Multi-syllable Word
Bad prosody (emphasis on wrong syllable):
I need to find my des-TIN-ySung naturally, "destiny" stresses DES-ti-ny, not des-TIN-y.
Fixed:
I need to find my DES-ti-nyOr restructure:
My DES-ti-ny is CALL-ing meWhy it works: Natural speech stress aligns with musical downbeats.
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Example 2: Preposition Emphasis
Bad prosody:
I walked IN-to THE roomPrepositions and articles shouldn't land on strong beats.
Fixed:
I WALKED in-to the ROOMWhy it works: Content words (walked, room) take emphasis, not function words (into, the).
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Twin Verses (V2 Must Develop)
V2 should advance the story, deepen emotion, or shift perspective — not rephrase V1.
Example 1: Narrative Song
Bad (V2 twins V1):
[Verse 1]
The streets are cold, I walk alone
No one around, just skin and bone
[Verse 2]
The roads are freezing, by myself
Empty sidewalks, no one elseV2 restates V1 with synonyms: streets→roads, cold→freezing, alone→by myself.
Fixed (V2 develops):
[Verse 1]
The streets are cold, I walk alone
No one around, just skin and bone
[Verse 2]
Found your old coat in the closet
Still smells like smoke and homeWhy it works: V2 introduces new detail (the coat), shifts emotional register (nostalgia), and advances the internal story.
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Example 2: Character Song
Bad (V2 twins V1):
[Verse 1]
He built an empire from the ground
The biggest name in every town
[Verse 2]
He made a fortune, rose so high
The greatest man beneath the skyFixed (V2 complicates):
[Verse 1]
He built an empire from the ground
The biggest name in every town
[Verse 2]
But late at night the ledgers showed
The debt behind the golden throneWhy it works: V2 introduces conflict and reveals what V1's success was hiding.
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Verse-Chorus Echo
The verse should set up the chorus, not preview it.
Example 1: Shared Hook Word
Bad:
[Verse]
We started something that will never end
This is where it all got its START
[Chorus]
Where it all got its START
Where we found our heart"Start" appears in both — chorus loses impact.
Fixed:
[Verse]
We started something that will never end
This is where we lit the spark
[Chorus]
Where it all got its start
Where we found our heartWhy it works: "Spark" sets up "start" without stealing it. The chorus still lands fresh.
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Example 2: Shared Imagery
Bad:
[Verse]
Standing in the warehouse, dust in the air
Machines gone quiet, no one left to care
[Chorus]
This warehouse holds our memories
These walls remember everything"Warehouse" and "walls" appear in both.
Fixed:
[Verse]
Footsteps echo where the machines once ran
Dust on every surface, silence where we began
[Chorus]
This warehouse holds our memories
These walls remember everythingWhy it works: Verse describes the space without naming it; chorus reveals the location.
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Filler Phrases
Lines padded to hit a rhyme or syllable count.
Example 1: Quote Setup Padding
Bad:
And then he turned around and said to me
These words that I will not forget, you see
"The truth will set you free""These words that I will not forget, you see" is filler padding to the quote.
Fixed:
He turned and locked eyes with me
"The truth will set you free"Why it works: Direct setup, no padding. Every word earns its place.
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Example 2: Syllable Padding
Bad:
I really truly deeply feel the pain
Of losing you, it drives me quite insane"Really truly deeply" and "quite" are filler.
Fixed:
I feel the weight of losing you
It's driving me insaneWhy it works: Fewer words, same meaning, stronger impact.
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Forced Rhymes
Never bend grammar or use unnatural phrasing just to land a rhyme.
Example 1: Inverted Word Order
Bad:
Into the night so dark I walked
Of all the things we never talked"Of all the things we never talked" inverts natural order for rhyme.
Fixed:
I walked into the darkest night
We never talked — that wasn't rightWhy it works: Natural word order, rhyme still works. Or use a near-rhyme:
Into the night so dark I walked
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Example 2: Forced Synonym
Bad:
She left me standing in the rain
My heart was filled with so much bane"Bane" is archaic and forced.
Fixed:
She left me standing in the rain
I don't think I'll be whole againWhy it works: Natural language, emotional truth over perfect rhyme.
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Too Vague vs. Too Specific
Example 1: Too Vague
Bad:
Everything changed that day
Nothing would be the same
We all felt different after
Things were never like beforeNo concrete details — could describe anything.
Fixed:
The phone lit up at 2 AM
Your voice cracked on the line
I sat down on the kitchen floor
The dog just licked my handWhy it works: Specific details (2 AM, kitchen floor, dog) ground the universal experience of receiving bad news without stating "I got bad news."
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Example 2: Too Specific (Alienating)
Bad:
Remember when we saw Jen's cousin Mark
At the Walgreens on North Dearborn and Clark
He said his friend from Accounting Two
Got fired by Linda from the Wednesday crewToo many proper nouns that mean nothing to listeners.
Fixed:
Remember running into him
At the drugstore, late that night
He said he heard the news at work
Someone finally saw the lightWhy it works: Specific enough to feel real, universal enough to resonate.
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Rhyme Quality
Example 1: Self-Rhyme
Bad:
I gave you all my love
You threw away my love"Love" rhymes with itself.
Fixed:
I gave you all my heart
You tore that love apart---
Example 2: Predictable Rhyme
Bad:
You set my heart on fire
Burning with desireFire/desire is overused to the point of cliche.
Fixed:
You set my heart on fire
Now I'm just ash and boneWhy it works: Unexpected image (ash and bone) instead of predictable rhyme partner.
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Density Mismatch
Match lyric density to tempo and mood.
Example: Laid-Back Track with Dense Lyrics
Musical Direction says: "Slow groove, 75 BPM, laid-back feel"
Bad (too dense for tempo):
[Verse]
Running through the city streets at night, sirens blaring
Cops on every corner, helicopter in the air
Ducking through the alley, jumping fences, heart is pounding
Gotta make it to the bridge before they catch me there
Breathless at the river, looking back at what I'm leaving
Everything I knew is burning, there's no turning backSix packed lines at 75 BPM — Suno will rush or compress.
Fixed (matches tempo):
[Verse]
Slow night in the city
Streetlights on the rain
Nothing but the echo
Of an empty trainWhy it works: Four short lines give the slow tempo room to breathe.