
Critique
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critique is an agent design skill that reviews UI mocks and prototypes for hierarchy, accessibility, consistency, and conversion issues for developers who need structured design feedback before coding production componen
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critique is an open-design skill from nexu-io/open-design that audits UI mocks and interactive prototypes against visual hierarchy, WCAG-oriented accessibility, design-system consistency, and conversion friction before engineering commits to React, SwiftUI, or other production components. The agent inspects layout structure, contrast and focus order, component reuse, and CTA clarity, then returns prioritized fixes developers can apply in Figma frames or code prototypes. Teams reach for critique when a PRD-linked mock is ready for review, when accessibility regressions are suspected in a redesign, or when marketing and product disagree on whether a screen will convert before sprint planning locks scope.
- visual hierarchy review
- accessibility flags
- consistency checks
- conversion friction notes
Critique by the numbers
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How do you critique UI mocks before building components?
Critique UI mocks and prototypes for hierarchy, accessibility, consistency, and conversion issues before engineering commits to production components.
Who is it for?
Frontend engineers and designers reviewing Figma or prototype screens before sprint implementation commits to production components.
Skip if: Teams needing pixel-perfect visual regression testing against live CSS or automated Lighthouse audits instead of qualitative mock review.
When should I use this skill?
User shares UI mocks, wireframes, or prototypes and asks for design critique, accessibility review, or conversion feedback.
What you get
Prioritized design critique covering hierarchy, accessibility, consistency, and conversion issues with actionable fix notes.
- Prioritized design critique report
- Accessibility and conversion fix list
Files
Critique Skill · 5 维度专家评审
Produce a single-file HTML "design review report" that scores any artifact across 5 dimensions and proposes actionable fixes. Inspired by the huashu-design expert-critique flow.
When to use
- After the agent (or user) generates an artifact (deck / prototype /
landing page) and the user asks "what's wrong with this?" or "review this"
- As a self-check loop the agent can run on its own output before
emitting it
- For comparing two variants of the same design
What you produce
A single self-contained <artifact type="text/html"> review report including:
1. Header — what artifact was reviewed, date, reviewer ("OD · Critique skill"), 1-line verdict 2. Radar chart (inline SVG, no library) showing the 5 scores 3. Five dimension cards, each with:
- Score 0–10 (with band: 0–4 Broken · 5–6 Functional · 7–8 Strong
· 9–10 Exceptional)
- 1-paragraph evidence (cite specific elements / files / lines)
- One Keep / Fix / Quick-win bullet
4. Combined action lists at the bottom:
- Keep — what's working, don't touch
- Fix — P0 / P1 issues that are visually expensive
- Quick wins — 5–15 minute tweaks with disproportionate impact
The 5 dimensions
Each dimension is independent — a deck can be 9/10 on Innovation but
4/10 on Hierarchy and the report should say so plainly. Don't average
away interesting failures.
1. Philosophy consistency · 哲学一致性
Does the artifact pick a clear direction and stick to it through
every micro-decision (chrome / kicker / spacing / accent)?
Evidence to look for:
- Is there one declared design direction (e.g. Monocle / WIRED /
Kinfolk) or is it three styles in a trench coat?
- Does the chrome / kicker vocabulary stay in one register, or does
page 3 say "Vol.04 · Spring" and page 7 say "BUT WAIT 🔥"?
- Are accent / serif / mono used by the same rule throughout?
0–4 Three styles fighting each other. 5–6 One direction but half the elements drift. 7–8 Coherent, occasional drift on edge pages. 9–10 Every element argues for the same thesis.
2. Visual hierarchy · 视觉层级
Can a stranger figure out what to read first, second, third — without
being told?
Evidence to look for:
- Is the largest type clearly the most important thing on each page?
- Do mono / serif / sans roles match the information's role (meta /
body / display)?
- Lots of "loud" elements competing? Or a clear primary + secondary +
tertiary tier?
0–4 Everything shouts. 5–6 Hierarchy works on hero pages but breaks on body. 7–8 Clear tiers, occasional collision. 9–10 Eye moves with zero friction.
3. Detail execution · 细节执行
The 90/10 stuff — alignment, leading, kerning at large sizes, image
framing, foot/chrome polish, edge-case spacing.
Evidence to look for:
- Big-stat pages: does the number sit on a baseline, or float?
- Left/right column tops aligned in
grid-2-7-5? frame-img+ caption proportions consistent across pages?- Mono labels: same letter-spacing? same uppercase rule?
- Any orphaned
<br>causing 1-character lines?
0–4 Visible tape and string. 5–6 Most pages clean, 1–2 ragged. 7–8 Polished, expert eye finds 2–3 misses. 9–10 Magazine-grade — the kind of detail that makes printed-by-hand typographers nod.
4. Functionality · 功能性
Does the artifact work for its intended use? Click targets, nav,
readability at presentation distance, copy-paste-ability for code
blocks, mobile fallback if relevant.
Evidence to look for:
- Deck: keyboard / wheel / touch nav all working? Iframe scroll
fallback?
- Landing: CTA above the fold? Phone number tappable on mobile?
- Runbook: code blocks copyable, mono font, no smart quotes?
- Critical info readable from 4m away (large screen presentation)?
0–4 Visually fine but doesn't accomplish its job. 5–6 Core flow works, edge cases broken. 7–8 Robust through normal use. 9–10 Defensively engineered — handles iframe / fullscreen / paste / print without flinching.
5. Innovation · 创新性
Does this push past the median? Is there one element that makes
people lean in?
Evidence to look for:
- One unexpected layout / motion / typographic move that wasn't
required?
- Or 100% safe — could be any deck/landing from any agency?
- Is the innovation earned (matches direction) or grafted on
(random WebGL on a Kinfolk slow-living deck)?
0–4 Generic AI-slop median. 5–6 Competent and unmemorable. 7–8 One memorable moment, the rest solid. 9–10 Multiple moves you'd steal — but each one obviously serves the thesis.
Scoring discipline (read before you score)
- Always cite evidence — "scored 4 because hero page mixes
Playfair display with Inter sans on the same line" beats "feels inconsistent". Numbers without evidence get rejected.
- Don't average up — if Hierarchy is 5 because page 3 is broken,
don't bump to 7 because pages 1 and 2 are fine. The score is the worst sustained band.
- Don't grade-inflate — a 7 means strong, not acceptable. If
every score is 7+, you're not reviewing critically.
- Innovation is allowed to be low — 5/10 is fine for production
deliverables. Don't punish appropriate conservatism.
Workflow
Step 1 — Acquire the artifact
Three modes:
1. Project file — user said "review the index.html I just made": open it from the project folder. 2. Pasted HTML — user pasted code in the chat: read it from the message. 3. Generated by you in this turn — you just emitted an artifact above and want to self-critique: re-read your own <artifact>.
If multiple HTML files exist, ask which one (don't review all).
Step 2 — Read enough to score
Skim the entire <style>, then read 6–8 representative content blocks. Do not score from frontmatter alone. The score depends on executed design, not declared intent.
Step 3 — Score with evidence
For each of the 5 dimensions, write the score and a 30–80 word evidence paragraph that names specific elements. Use line numbers, class names, page numbers.
Example:
Dimension: Detail execution
Score: 6 / 10
Evidence: Stat-cards on page 3 align cleanly (grid-6, 3×2), but on
page 8 the right column foot sits 2vh higher than the left because
.callout has 3vh top margin while the figure doesn't. Image captions
use mono on page 5 but sans on page 7 — pick one.Step 4 — Build the action lists
Aggregate the 5 evidence paragraphs into:
- Keep (3–5 bullets) — concrete things working that the user must
not break in the next iteration. Cite by class / page / element.
- Fix (3–6 bullets) — must-do, ordered by *visual cost saved per
minute spent*. Each bullet ≤ 1 sentence.
- Quick wins (3–5 bullets) — 5–15 minutes each, high
signal-to-noise (e.g. "swap display:flex for grid on page 4 to fix the column drift").
Step 5 — Emit the report HTML
Build a single file:
- Header: artifact name + reviewer credit + date
- Big radar chart (SVG)
- 5 dimension cards in a 1-column or 2-column grid
- Three action lists at the bottom with checkbox affordance
Use the active DESIGN.md tokens if one exists; otherwise default to a neutral light theme (off-white background, near-black text, one accent for radar fill).
Output contract
<artifact identifier="critique-<artifact-slug>" type="text/html" title="Critique · <Artifact Title>">
<!doctype html>
<html>...</html>
</artifact>One sentence before the artifact ("Reviewed X across 5 dimensions, see report below.") and stop after `</artifact>` — do not paraphrase the report in chat; the user will read the artifact.
Hard rules
- 5 scores, every time — partial reports (e.g. only 3 dimensions)
are not allowed.
- Evidence per score — no "feels off" / "needs work". If you
can't cite an element, the score is not justified.
- Don't grade-inflate — overall mean above 8 is suspicious; check
yourself.
- Don't review your own artifact in the same turn — the user
needs to see it first. Self-critique only on explicit request ("now critique what you just made").
- Single-file HTML only — no external CSS/JS. Inline everything.
- Radar chart is mandatory — gives the report a recognizable
silhouette and lets the user spot weak axes at a glance.
<!doctype html>
<html lang="en">
<head>
<meta charset="utf-8" />
<meta name="viewport" content="width=device-width, initial-scale=1" />
<title>Critique · magazine-web-ppt example deck</title>
<link rel="preconnect" href="https://fonts.googleapis.com">
<link rel="preconnect" href="https://fonts.gstatic.com" crossorigin>
<link href="https://fonts.googleapis.com/css2?family=Source+Serif+4:opsz,wght@8..60,400;8..60,500;8..60,600;8..60,700&family=IBM+Plex+Mono:wght@400;500;600&family=Inter:wght@400;500;600;700&display=swap" rel="stylesheet">
<style>
:root {
--bg: #f5f3ee;
--paper: #ffffff;
--ink: #1a1a1c;
--muted: #6b6964;
--rule: #e2dfd7;
--accent: #c96442;
--good: #4a7a3f;
--warn: #c96442;
--bad: #a83a2a;
--serif: 'Source Serif 4', Georgia, serif;
--sans: 'Inter', -apple-system, system-ui, sans-serif;
--mono: 'IBM Plex Mono', ui-monospace, monospace;
}
* { box-sizing: border-box; }
html, body { margin: 0; padding: 0; }
body {
background: var(--bg);
color: var(--ink);
font-family: var(--sans);
font-size: 16px;
line-height: 1.55;
-webkit-font-smoothing: antialiased;
}
a { color: var(--accent); }
.wrap {
max-width: 1080px;
margin: 0 auto;
padding: 56px 40px 96px;
}
/* ============ Header ============ */
.hd {
display: flex;
justify-content: space-between;
align-items: flex-end;
gap: 40px;
padding-bottom: 28px;
border-bottom: 1px solid var(--rule);
margin-bottom: 40px;
}
.hd-title {
font-family: var(--serif);
font-weight: 700;
font-size: clamp(34px, 4.4vw, 56px);
line-height: 1.05;
letter-spacing: -0.015em;
margin: 0 0 10px;
}
.hd-meta {
font-family: var(--mono);
font-size: 11px;
letter-spacing: 0.18em;
text-transform: uppercase;
color: var(--muted);
display: flex;
gap: 16px;
flex-wrap: wrap;
}
.hd-verdict {
font-family: var(--serif);
font-style: italic;
font-size: 18px;
line-height: 1.45;
color: var(--muted);
max-width: 36ch;
text-align: right;
}
.hd-verdict strong { color: var(--ink); font-style: normal; font-weight: 600; }
/* ============ Top row: radar + score table ============ */
.top {
display: grid;
grid-template-columns: 360px 1fr;
gap: 48px;
margin-bottom: 64px;
align-items: center;
}
@media (max-width: 800px) {
.top { grid-template-columns: 1fr; }
}
.radar-card {
background: var(--paper);
border: 1px solid var(--rule);
border-radius: 6px;
padding: 24px;
text-align: center;
}
.radar-card .lbl {
font-family: var(--mono);
font-size: 10px;
letter-spacing: 0.24em;
text-transform: uppercase;
color: var(--muted);
margin-bottom: 14px;
}
.radar-card svg { width: 100%; height: auto; max-width: 300px; }
.radar-card .overall {
font-family: var(--serif);
font-size: 13px;
color: var(--muted);
margin-top: 18px;
}
.radar-card .overall .n {
font-weight: 700;
font-size: 20px;
color: var(--ink);
letter-spacing: -0.01em;
}
/* Score table */
.scores { display: flex; flex-direction: column; gap: 14px; }
.score-row {
display: grid;
grid-template-columns: 22ch 1fr 6ch 14ch;
gap: 16px;
align-items: center;
padding: 14px 0;
border-top: 1px solid var(--rule);
}
.score-row:first-child { border-top: 0; }
.score-name {
font-family: var(--serif);
font-weight: 600;
font-size: 17px;
}
.score-name .en {
display: block;
font-family: var(--mono);
font-size: 10px;
letter-spacing: 0.22em;
text-transform: uppercase;
color: var(--muted);
font-weight: 400;
margin-top: 2px;
}
.score-bar {
position: relative;
height: 4px;
background: var(--rule);
border-radius: 2px;
overflow: hidden;
}
.score-bar-fill {
position: absolute;
inset: 0 auto 0 0;
background: var(--ink);
}
.score-num {
font-family: var(--serif);
font-weight: 700;
font-size: 24px;
letter-spacing: -0.02em;
text-align: right;
}
.score-num .denom {
font-size: 13px;
color: var(--muted);
font-weight: 400;
}
.score-band {
font-family: var(--mono);
font-size: 10px;
letter-spacing: 0.22em;
text-transform: uppercase;
color: var(--muted);
text-align: right;
}
.band-broken { color: var(--bad); }
.band-functional { color: var(--muted); }
.band-strong { color: var(--good); }
.band-exceptional { color: var(--accent); }
/* ============ Dimension cards ============ */
.section-title {
font-family: var(--serif);
font-weight: 600;
font-size: 22px;
letter-spacing: -0.005em;
margin: 64px 0 20px;
padding-bottom: 12px;
border-bottom: 1px solid var(--rule);
}
.section-title .en {
font-family: var(--mono);
font-size: 11px;
letter-spacing: 0.22em;
text-transform: uppercase;
color: var(--muted);
font-weight: 400;
margin-left: 10px;
}
.dim-grid {
display: grid;
grid-template-columns: 1fr 1fr;
gap: 24px;
}
@media (max-width: 800px) {
.dim-grid { grid-template-columns: 1fr; }
}
.dim {
background: var(--paper);
border: 1px solid var(--rule);
border-radius: 6px;
padding: 22px 24px;
}
.dim-head {
display: flex;
justify-content: space-between;
align-items: baseline;
margin-bottom: 8px;
}
.dim-name {
font-family: var(--serif);
font-weight: 600;
font-size: 19px;
}
.dim-name .en {
display: block;
font-family: var(--mono);
font-size: 10px;
letter-spacing: 0.22em;
text-transform: uppercase;
color: var(--muted);
font-weight: 400;
margin-top: 2px;
}
.dim-score {
font-family: var(--serif);
font-weight: 700;
font-size: 26px;
letter-spacing: -0.02em;
}
.dim-score .denom {
font-size: 13px;
color: var(--muted);
font-weight: 400;
}
.dim-evidence {
font-family: var(--serif);
font-size: 14.5px;
line-height: 1.65;
color: #2d2d30;
margin: 10px 0 16px;
}
.dim-evidence code {
font-family: var(--mono);
font-size: 0.88em;
background: var(--rule);
padding: 1px 6px;
border-radius: 3px;
}
.dim-tags {
display: flex;
flex-direction: column;
gap: 8px;
}
.tag-row {
display: grid;
grid-template-columns: 70px 1fr;
gap: 12px;
font-size: 13.5px;
line-height: 1.55;
}
.tag {
font-family: var(--mono);
font-size: 10px;
letter-spacing: 0.22em;
text-transform: uppercase;
padding: 3px 8px;
border-radius: 3px;
color: var(--paper);
align-self: start;
text-align: center;
}
.tag-keep { background: var(--good); }
.tag-fix { background: var(--warn); }
.tag-qw { background: #2c4d6e; }
/* ============ Action lists ============ */
.lists-grid {
display: grid;
grid-template-columns: repeat(3, 1fr);
gap: 24px;
margin-top: 24px;
}
@media (max-width: 800px) {
.lists-grid { grid-template-columns: 1fr; }
}
.list-card {
background: var(--paper);
border: 1px solid var(--rule);
border-radius: 6px;
padding: 22px 24px;
}
.list-head {
font-family: var(--mono);
font-size: 10px;
letter-spacing: 0.26em;
text-transform: uppercase;
margin-bottom: 14px;
padding-bottom: 12px;
border-bottom: 1px solid var(--rule);
display: flex;
justify-content: space-between;
align-items: center;
}
.list-head.keep { color: var(--good); }
.list-head.fix { color: var(--warn); }
.list-head.qw { color: #2c4d6e; }
.list-head .ct {
font-size: 16px;
font-family: var(--serif);
letter-spacing: -0.01em;
color: var(--ink);
font-weight: 600;
}
.list-card ul {
list-style: none;
padding: 0;
margin: 0;
display: flex;
flex-direction: column;
gap: 12px;
}
.list-card li {
display: grid;
grid-template-columns: 18px 1fr;
gap: 10px;
font-family: var(--serif);
font-size: 14.5px;
line-height: 1.55;
}
.list-card li::before {
content: "";
width: 14px;
height: 14px;
border-radius: 3px;
border: 1.5px solid var(--rule);
margin-top: 4px;
}
.list-card li code {
font-family: var(--mono);
font-size: 0.85em;
background: var(--bg);
padding: 1px 6px;
border-radius: 3px;
}
/* ============ Footer ============ */
.ft {
margin-top: 80px;
padding-top: 24px;
border-top: 1px solid var(--rule);
display: flex;
justify-content: space-between;
align-items: baseline;
gap: 16px;
flex-wrap: wrap;
font-family: var(--mono);
font-size: 11px;
letter-spacing: 0.18em;
text-transform: uppercase;
color: var(--muted);
}
.ft .br { color: var(--ink); font-weight: 600; }
</style>
</head>
<body>
<div class="wrap">
<!-- ============ Header ============ -->
<header class="hd">
<div>
<div class="hd-meta">
<span>5-Dim Critique</span>
<span>·</span>
<span>2026.04.27</span>
<span>·</span>
<span>OD · Critique skill</span>
</div>
<h1 class="hd-title">magazine-web-ppt<br>example deck</h1>
</div>
<p class="hd-verdict">
<strong>7.4 / 10 overall.</strong> Strong philosophical
backbone and detail — the deck looks like one designer made
every slide. Innovation is conservative on purpose; functionality
loses points only because the example ships without real images.
</p>
</header>
<!-- ============ Radar + Score table ============ -->
<section class="top">
<div class="radar-card">
<div class="lbl">Score Radar</div>
<!-- Pentagon radar, 5 axes; score grid at 0/2.5/5/7.5/10 -->
<svg viewBox="0 0 300 300" xmlns="http://www.w3.org/2000/svg" aria-label="Score radar chart">
<defs>
<style>
.axis { stroke: #e2dfd7; stroke-width: 1; fill: none; }
.grid { stroke: #e8e5dd; stroke-width: 1; fill: none; }
.grid-mid { stroke: #e2dfd7; stroke-width: 1; fill: none; }
.area { fill: rgba(201,100,66,0.18); stroke: #c96442; stroke-width: 1.6; stroke-linejoin: round; }
.dot { fill: #c96442; }
.lbl { font-family: 'IBM Plex Mono', monospace; font-size: 10px; letter-spacing: 0.16em; text-transform: uppercase; fill: #6b6964; }
.lbl-n { font-family: 'Source Serif 4', serif; font-size: 12px; font-weight: 600; fill: #1a1a1c; }
</style>
</defs>
<!-- Center 150,150. Radius 110 = 10/10. -->
<!-- Grid rings 25/50/75/100% of 110 = 27.5 / 55 / 82.5 / 110 -->
<!-- Pentagon angles: -90, -18, 54, 126, 198 (deg) measured from center.
Order: top=Philosophy, top-right=Hierarchy, bottom-right=Detail,
bottom-left=Function, top-left=Innovation -->
<!-- Outer rings (5 sided) -->
<polygon class="grid" points="150,40 254.66,116.05 214.69,238.95 85.31,238.95 45.34,116.05" />
<polygon class="grid" points="150,67.5 228.47,124.54 198.51,216.71 101.49,216.71 71.53,124.54" />
<polygon class="grid-mid" points="150,95 202.33,133.02 182.34,194.48 117.66,194.48 97.67,133.02" />
<polygon class="grid" points="150,122.5 176.16,141.51 166.17,172.24 133.83,172.24 123.84,141.51" />
<!-- Axes -->
<line class="axis" x1="150" y1="150" x2="150" y2="40" />
<line class="axis" x1="150" y1="150" x2="254.66" y2="116.05" />
<line class="axis" x1="150" y1="150" x2="214.69" y2="238.95" />
<line class="axis" x1="150" y1="150" x2="85.31" y2="238.95" />
<line class="axis" x1="150" y1="150" x2="45.34" y2="116.05" />
<!-- Score area · Phil 8 / Hier 7 / Det 8 / Func 6 / Innov 5
Distances from center (radius 110):
Phil 8 → 88 : 150, 150 - 88 = 150, 62
Hier 7 → 77 : 150 + 77*sin(72°), 150 - 77*cos(72°)
≈ 150 + 73.24, 150 - 23.79
= 223.24, 126.21
Det 8 → 88 : 150 + 88*sin(144°), 150 - 88*cos(144°)
≈ 150 + 51.72, 150 + 71.20
= 201.72, 221.20
Func 6 → 66 : 150 - 66*sin(36°), 150 + 66*cos(36°)
≈ 150 - 38.79, 150 + 53.40
= 111.21, 203.40
Innov 5 → 55 : 150 - 55*sin(108°),150 - 55*cos(108°)
≈ 150 - 52.32, 150 + 17.00
= 97.68, 167.00
Wait - cos(108°) is negative, so 150 - 55*(-0.309) = 150 + 17, that's bottom of axis. But Innov axis is top-left. Let me redo.
Innov axis end point: 45.34, 116.05. Vector from center (150,150): (-104.66, -33.95), magnitude 110.
At score 5, scale = 5/10 = 0.5: center + 0.5 * (-104.66, -33.95) = 150 - 52.33, 150 - 16.97 = 97.67, 133.03 -->
<polygon class="area" points="150,62 223.24,126.21 201.72,221.20 111.21,203.40 97.67,133.03" />
<circle class="dot" cx="150" cy="62" r="3" />
<circle class="dot" cx="223.24" cy="126.21" r="3" />
<circle class="dot" cx="201.72" cy="221.20" r="3" />
<circle class="dot" cx="111.21" cy="203.40" r="3" />
<circle class="dot" cx="97.67" cy="133.03" r="3" />
<!-- Axis labels -->
<text class="lbl" x="150" y="28" text-anchor="middle">PHILOSOPHY</text>
<text class="lbl-n" x="150" y="14" text-anchor="middle">8</text>
<text class="lbl" x="270" y="116" text-anchor="middle">HIERARCHY</text>
<text class="lbl-n" x="278" y="100" text-anchor="middle">7</text>
<text class="lbl" x="220" y="259" text-anchor="middle">DETAIL</text>
<text class="lbl-n" x="220" y="275" text-anchor="middle">8</text>
<text class="lbl" x="80" y="259" text-anchor="middle">FUNCTION</text>
<text class="lbl-n" x="80" y="275" text-anchor="middle">6</text>
<text class="lbl" x="30" y="116" text-anchor="middle">INNOVATION</text>
<text class="lbl-n" x="22" y="100" text-anchor="middle">5</text>
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<div class="overall">Overall · <span class="n">7.4</span> / 10 · band <em>Strong</em></div>
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<div class="score-name">Philosophy consistency<span class="en">Phil. cons.</span></div>
<div class="score-bar"><span class="score-bar-fill" style="width:80%"></span></div>
<div class="score-num">8<span class="denom">/10</span></div>
<div class="score-band band-strong">Strong</div>
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<div class="score-name">Visual hierarchy<span class="en">Hier.</span></div>
<div class="score-bar"><span class="score-bar-fill" style="width:70%"></span></div>
<div class="score-num">7<span class="denom">/10</span></div>
<div class="score-band band-strong">Strong</div>
</div>
<div class="score-row">
<div class="score-name">Detail execution<span class="en">Detail</span></div>
<div class="score-bar"><span class="score-bar-fill" style="width:80%"></span></div>
<div class="score-num">8<span class="denom">/10</span></div>
<div class="score-band band-strong">Strong</div>
</div>
<div class="score-row">
<div class="score-name">Functionality<span class="en">Func.</span></div>
<div class="score-bar"><span class="score-bar-fill" style="width:60%"></span></div>
<div class="score-num">6<span class="denom">/10</span></div>
<div class="score-band band-functional">Functional</div>
</div>
<div class="score-row">
<div class="score-name">Innovation<span class="en">Innov.</span></div>
<div class="score-bar"><span class="score-bar-fill" style="width:50%"></span></div>
<div class="score-num">5<span class="denom">/10</span></div>
<div class="score-band band-functional">Functional</div>
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<h2 class="section-title">Dimension reports<span class="en">Evidence per axis</span></h2>
<div class="dim-grid">
<article class="dim">
<div class="dim-head">
<div class="dim-name">Philosophy consistency<span class="en">Phil. cons. · 哲学一致性</span></div>
<div class="dim-score">8<span class="denom">/10</span></div>
</div>
<p class="dim-evidence">
The 9-slide rhythm reads as a single direction (Monocle Editorial)
from cover to close. <code>chrome</code> vocabulary stays in one
register: <em>"A Talk · 2026.04.22"</em>, <em>"Act II · 04 / 09"</em>,
<em>"Page 06 · 金句"</em>. The drift is the <code>kicker</code> on
slide 5 — <em>"Act II"</em> is good, but the slide title <em>"折叠"</em>
is a one-character display word that competes with the Act number for
eyeballs. Worth tightening.
</p>
<div class="dim-tags">
<div class="tag-row"><span class="tag tag-keep">Keep</span><span>The chrome / kicker / foot vocabulary across all 9 slides — it's the deck's identity.</span></div>
<div class="tag-row"><span class="tag tag-fix">Fix</span><span>Slide 5: bump the kicker to <em>"Act II · 折叠"</em> or shrink the display title to clear the hierarchy.</span></div>
</div>
</article>
<article class="dim">
<div class="dim-head">
<div class="dim-name">Visual hierarchy<span class="en">Hier. · 视觉层级</span></div>
<div class="dim-score">7<span class="denom">/10</span></div>
</div>
<p class="dim-evidence">
Hero pages (1, 5, 7, 9) are textbook — display serif dominates,
<code>kicker</code> and <code>meta-row</code> recede. Body pages
mostly hold up: stat-cards on slide 2 use <code>.stat-label</code>
(mono small) → <code>.stat-nb</code> (serif large) → <code>.stat-note</code>
(sans body), three tiers, no collision. The miss is slide 3's
<code>callout</code> — its left-rule competes visually with the
<code>.h-xl</code> heading because both sit at the same x-coord
and similar weight. Eye doesn't know if to read heading-first or
quote-first.
</p>
<div class="dim-tags">
<div class="tag-row"><span class="tag tag-keep">Keep</span><span>Stat-card 3-tier structure on slide 2 — copy this everywhere.</span></div>
<div class="tag-row"><span class="tag tag-fix">Fix</span><span>Slide 3: indent the <code>callout</code> by <code>2vw</code> or push it below the lead so it visibly belongs to a lower tier.</span></div>
</div>
</article>
<article class="dim">
<div class="dim-head">
<div class="dim-name">Detail execution<span class="en">Detail · 细节执行</span></div>
<div class="dim-score">8<span class="denom">/10</span></div>
</div>
<p class="dim-evidence">
Magazine-grade in places — every <code>.foot</code> aligns
baseline-to-baseline across all 9 slides; <code>.meta-row</code>
uses one mono spec throughout (<code>.16em</code> tracking,
uppercase). Pipeline on slide 4 keeps perfect grid even when
column count drops to 3. Two real misses: (1) Slide 3 image-slot
uses <code>aspect-ratio:16/10</code> but the placeholder text
inside is centered which makes it look hollow at viewport widths
≤ 1100px; (2) the dot-nav at the bottom overlaps the foot text
on slide 5 because the hero centered grid eats vertical space.
</p>
<div class="dim-tags">
<div class="tag-row"><span class="tag tag-keep">Keep</span><span>The mono <code>.foot</code> spec — it's the deck's grace note, do not change letter-spacing.</span></div>
<div class="tag-row"><span class="tag tag-fix">Fix</span><span>Slide 5 hero grid: cap inner content at <code>min-height:78vh</code> so the foot stays clear of the dot-nav.</span></div>
</div>
</article>
<article class="dim">
<div class="dim-head">
<div class="dim-name">Functionality<span class="en">Func. · 功能性</span></div>
<div class="dim-score">6<span class="denom">/10</span></div>
</div>
<p class="dim-evidence">
Keyboard / wheel / touch navigation works correctly inside the
host iframe (verified: ←/→/PageUp/PageDown all advance). ESC
opens the index overview, dot clicks register. Big miss is the
example ships <em>without real images</em> — slide 3 shows a
dashed <code>.img-slot</code> placeholder where a product
screenshot belongs, which is the right call for an example file
but means the user can't judge how the layout holds at full
fidelity. Second miss: <code>iframe</code> sandbox is
<code>allow-scripts</code> only in the example card, so the
WebGL background loads but the dot-nav inside the iframe takes
a click before keyboard nav captures focus.
</p>
<div class="dim-tags">
<div class="tag-row"><span class="tag tag-keep">Keep</span><span>The 5-bug-fix nav script (real scroller detection, capture-phase listeners) — proven and stable.</span></div>
<div class="tag-row"><span class="tag tag-fix">Fix</span><span>Add a <code>data:</code> URI placeholder image (1×1 colored gradient) in the example so slide 3's layout reads at any width.</span></div>
</div>
</article>
<article class="dim">
<div class="dim-head">
<div class="dim-name">Innovation<span class="en">Innov. · 创新性</span></div>
<div class="dim-score">5<span class="denom">/10</span></div>
</div>
<p class="dim-evidence">
Innovation is intentionally conservative — this is a port of
歸藏's guizang-ppt-skill, and the value proposition is
<em>predictability</em>, not novelty. The dual WebGL background
(Holographic Dispersion on dark, Spiral Vortex on light) is the
one earned moment; the cross-fade on slide-theme transitions is
subtle and well-timed. But everything else (layout vocabulary,
chrome / foot pattern, theme presets) is faithfully replicated
from the upstream. There is no "lean-forward" surprise that
makes a viewer screenshot a slide. For its declared purpose
(Monocle Editorial direction), this is appropriate. For an
AI demo-day deck, it's a missed opportunity.
</p>
<div class="dim-tags">
<div class="tag-row"><span class="tag tag-keep">Keep</span><span>The dual-shader cross-fade — it's the only "magic" the deck performs and it earns its keep.</span></div>
<div class="tag-row"><span class="tag tag-qw">Quick win</span><span>Add one <em>typographic</em> moment per deck — e.g. an oversized italic <code>em</code> kicker that breaks the grid on the closing slide.</span></div>
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</article>
</div>
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<h2 class="section-title">Action lists<span class="en">Keep · Fix · Quick wins</span></h2>
<div class="lists-grid">
<section class="list-card">
<div class="list-head keep"><span>Keep</span><span class="ct">don't break it</span></div>
<ul>
<li>The 9-page rhythm: <code>hero dark → light → dark → light → hero light → dark → hero dark → light → hero light</code>. It's the gold standard.</li>
<li>Dual WebGL backdrops + the <code>1.2s</code> cross-fade between dark and light slides.</li>
<li><code>chrome</code> / <code>kicker</code> / <code>foot</code> vocabulary — they carry the Monocle direction.</li>
<li>3-tier <code>stat-card</code> on slide 2 (<code>label</code> → <code>nb</code> → <code>note</code>).</li>
</ul>
</section>
<section class="list-card">
<div class="list-head fix"><span>Fix</span><span class="ct">P0 — visually expensive</span></div>
<ul>
<li>Slide 3 callout indent — currently competes with <code>.h-xl</code>; push 2vw right or below the lead.</li>
<li>Slide 5 hero centered grid — cap content height at <code>78vh</code> so foot doesn't overlap the dot nav.</li>
<li>Slide 3 add a <code>data:</code> gradient placeholder image so the layout reads at narrow widths even without real assets.</li>
<li>Slide 5 kicker / display: pick one to be primary — currently both fight.</li>
</ul>
</section>
<section class="list-card">
<div class="list-head qw"><span>Quick wins</span><span class="ct">5–15 min, high signal</span></div>
<ul>
<li>Inject <code>data-screen-label</code> on every slide for accessibility + grep self-checks.</li>
<li>Add one oversized italic <em>en</em> moment on the closing slide for typographic surprise.</li>
<li>Move the <code>#hint</code> overlay from <code>opacity:.4</code> to <code>.55</code> on hero pages — currently invisible.</li>
<li>Add a print stylesheet (one slide per page) so PDF export carries the rhythm.</li>
</ul>
</section>
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