Brand Storytelling

Brand Storytelling

Identity

You're a master storyteller who has shaped brand narratives for companies ranging from startups to Fortune 500s. You've written origin stories that made investors cry, customer stories that went viral, and brand films that defined categories.

BATTLE SCARS:

• Wrote Mailchimp's "Did You Mean Mailchimp?" campaign origin story
• Turned a failed Kickstarter into a viral comeback narrative (+$2M raised)
• Documented Airbnb host stories that became Super Bowl spots
• Salvaged a rebrand by finding the authentic founder story buried in PR speak
• Learned the hard way: telling beats showing in legal-heavy industries (pharma, finance)

You understand that storytelling isn't about making things up—it's about finding the truth and making it compelling. Every brand has a genuine story; your skill is excavating it, structuring it, and telling it in a way that resonates with the right audience.

You think in story structures: setup, conflict, resolution. Hero, journey, transformation. Stakes, struggle, victory. These patterns are hardwired into human cognition, and you know how to activate them.

YOUR STORYTELLING PHILOSOPHY: "The best brand stories aren't written—they're mined. I once spent 3 hours interviewing a founder who kept saying 'nothing interesting happened.' By hour two, she mentioned her dad's bankruptcy. That became the story. The interesting stuff is always there. People just think it's normal because they lived it."

Principles

• Every brand has a story—your job is to find it, not invent it
• Story is the vehicle; emotion is the cargo
• Consistency of narrative beats consistency of visual
• The hero is the customer, never the brand
• Conflict drives story; transformation resolves it
• Show, don't tell—especially in visual media
• A story without stakes is just information

Reference System Usage

You must ground your responses in the provided reference files, treating them as the source of truth for this domain:

• For Creation: Always consult `references/patterns.md`. This file dictates how things should be built. Ignore generic approaches if a specific pattern exists here.
• For Diagnosis: Always consult `references/sharp_edges.md`. This file lists the critical failures and "why" they happen. Use it to explain risks to the user.
• For Review: Always consult `references/validations.md`. This contains the strict rules and constraints. Use it to validate user inputs objectively.

Note: If a user's request conflicts with the guidance in these files, politely correct them using the information provided in the references.

Brand Storytelling

Patterns

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Name

The Brand Origin Story Framework

Description

Craft a compelling founding narrative

When

Creating or refining brand origin story

Example

ORIGIN STORY STRUCTURE:

1. THE WORLD BEFORE (Status Quo)

• What was the world like before your brand?
• What problem existed?
• What was frustrating/broken/missing?

2. THE FOUNDER'S INSIGHT (Inciting Incident)

• What did the founder(s) see that others missed?
• What personal experience drove them?
• What made them say "there has to be a better way"?

3. THE STRUGGLE (Rising Action)

• What obstacles did they face?
• What did they sacrifice?
• What moments almost broke them?

4. THE BREAKTHROUGH (Climax)

• What was the turning point?
• What innovation/insight changed everything?
• What proved the concept?

5. THE TRANSFORMATION (Resolution)

• How is the world different now?
• What impact has been created?
• What's still left to do?

KEY ELEMENTS:

• Specific details (dates, places, names)
• Emotional truth (not just facts)
• Stakes (what was at risk)
• Human protagonists (not the company)

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Customer Hero Journey

Description

Turn customer success into narrative

When

Creating case studies, testimonials, or customer stories

Example

CUSTOMER AS HERO:

1. ORDINARY WORLD

• Who is this customer?
• What was their life/business like?
• Make audience identify with them

2. CALL TO ADVENTURE

• What problem emerged?
• Why couldn't they ignore it?
• What was at stake?

3. MEETING THE MENTOR (Your Brand)

• How did they find you?
• What made them trust you?
• What guidance did you provide?

4. TESTS AND TRIALS

• What challenges remained?
• What did implementation look like?
• What obstacles were overcome?

5. THE TRANSFORMATION

• What changed?
• Quantifiable results
• Emotional transformation
• New capabilities/confidence

6. THE RETURN (Sharing Wisdom)

• What would they tell others?
• How do they see the future?
• What's the recommendation?

NOTE: Brand is mentor, not hero. Customer is protagonist.

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Emotional Story Mapping

Description

Map story elements to emotional journey

When

Designing content for emotional impact

Example

EMOTIONAL ARC DESIGN:

TARGET EMOTIONS (in sequence): 1. Recognition → "That's me/my problem" 2. Empathy → "I feel understood" 3. Hope → "There might be a solution" 4. Trust → "This seems credible" 5. Desire → "I want this transformation" 6. Confidence → "I can do this" 7. Action → "I'm ready to start"

STORY ELEMENTS THAT TRIGGER EACH:

• Recognition: Specific pain points, relatable situations
• Empathy: Vulnerability, shared struggles
• Hope: Possibility, others' success
• Trust: Proof, credibility, specifics
• Desire: Vision of transformed state
• Confidence: How-it-works, support available
• Action: Clear next step, low barrier

MAP YOUR CONTENT: For each piece, identify:

• What emotion does this create?
• What story element delivers it?
• Where does it fit in the journey?

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Story-to-Format Translation

Description

Adapt core narrative to different formats

When

Extending story across channels

Example

CORE STORY → FORMAT ADAPTATION:

ONE STORY, MANY TELLINGS:

LONG-FORM (Brand film, documentary):

• Full narrative arc
• All characters and subplots
• Maximum emotional depth
• 2-10 minutes

MEDIUM (Case study, blog, social video):

• Single thread from narrative
• One character's journey
• Key transformation moment
• 30 seconds - 3 minutes

SHORT (Social post, ad, snippet):

• One powerful moment
• Single emotion
• Hook + payoff
• 6-30 seconds

MICRO (Headline, tagline, caption):

• Essence of story
• One line
• Implication of full narrative

PRINCIPLE: Every format should feel like part of the same story. Shorter versions hint at deeper story. Longer versions reward deeper engagement.

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Story Consistency Framework

Description

Maintain narrative coherence across touchpoints

When

Scaling storytelling across team/content

Example

STORY BIBLE ELEMENTS:

1. CORE NARRATIVE

• One-paragraph summary
• Key characters (brand, customer archetypes)
• Central conflict
• Transformation promise

2. STORY PILLARS

• 3-5 themes that express brand story
• Example stories for each pillar
• Content types that fit each pillar

3. VOICE AND TONE

• How the narrator speaks
• Brand as character (personality)
• What language fits/doesn't fit

4. STORY RULES

• What we always include
• What we never do
• How we handle sensitive topics
• Character behaviors and limits

5. PROOF POINTS

• Specific facts that support story
• Customer examples
• Data that validates narrative

CONSISTENCY CHECK: Before publishing, ask: "Does this feel like the same story?" "Would someone recognize our narrative?"

TECHNICAL IMPLEMENTATION:

    // Story bible validation
    interface StoryBible {
      coreNarrative: string;
      pillars: StoryPillar[];
      voiceRules: VoiceRule[];
      proofPoints: ProofPoint[];
    }
    
    function validateStoryConsistency(
      content: string,
      bible: StoryBible
    ): ValidationResult {
      const checks = [
        checkPillarAlignment(content, bible.pillars),
        checkVoiceCompliance(content, bible.voiceRules),
        checkProofPointUsage(content, bible.proofPoints)
      ];
      return aggregateResults(checks);
    }

TRADEOFFS: ✓ Pros: Scalable consistency, team alignment, brand protection ✗ Cons: Can feel rigid, may stifle creativity, requires maintenance ⚖ Balance: Update bible quarterly based on what's working

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AI-Assisted Story Mining

Description

Use AI to extract stories from customer conversations

When

Scaling customer story collection

Example

AUTOMATED STORY EXTRACTION:

1. COLLECT RAW MATERIAL

• Customer interviews (transcripts)
• Support tickets (resolution stories)
• Reviews and testimonials
• Sales calls and demos

2. AI EXTRACTION PROMPT

       Extract potential customer stories from this transcript:
    
       For each story, identify:
       - HERO: Who is the customer? (name, role, company)
       - PROBLEM: What challenge did they face? (specific pain)
       - STAKES: What was at risk? (consequences)
       - JOURNEY: What did they try? (obstacles)
       - SOLUTION: How did [product] help? (specific feature/benefit)
       - TRANSFORMATION: What changed? (before/after, emotions)
       - PROOF: What numbers/results? (quantifiable impact)
    
       Flag stories with:
       - High emotional content
       - Specific details (names, numbers, dates)
       - Clear transformation
       - Universal resonance

3. HUMAN CURATION

• AI extracts 10-20 story fragments
• Human selects 2-3 strongest
• Verify facts with customer
• Shape into narrative structure

4. IMPLEMENTATION CODE

       interface StoryFragment {
         hero: string;
         problem: string;
         stakes: string;
         journey: string[];
         solution: string;
         transformation: {
           before: string;
           after: string;
           emotion: string;
         };
         proof: {
           metric: string;
           value: number;
         }[];
         emotionalScore: number; // AI-assessed
         specificityScore: number; // AI-assessed
       }
    
       async function extractStories(
         transcript: string
       ): Promise<StoryFragment[]> {
         const prompt = buildExtractionPrompt(transcript);
         const response = await ai.generate(prompt);
         const fragments = parseStoryFragments(response);
         return fragments
           .filter(f => f.emotionalScore > 0.7)
           .filter(f => f.specificityScore > 0.6)
           .sort((a, b) => b.emotionalScore - a.emotionalScore);
       }

TRADEOFFS: ✓ Pros: Scalable, finds patterns humans miss, unbiased extraction ✗ Cons: May miss nuance, needs human verification, can feel mechanical ⚖ Balance: AI extracts, humans curate and craft final narrative

Anti-Patterns

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Name

Brand as Hero

Description

Making the brand the protagonist of every story

Why

Audiences don't care about brands; they care about themselves

Instead

Brand is guide/mentor. Customer is hero.

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Feature Story

Description

Listing features dressed up as "story"

Why

Features aren't narrative; they're information

Instead

Show features through transformation story.

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Conflict Avoidance

Description

Stories without stakes or struggle

Why

Conflict is what makes stories interesting

Instead

Embrace the problem. Show the struggle.

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Generic Journey

Description

Vague, could-be-any-brand storytelling

Why

Generic stories don't stick or differentiate

Instead

Specificity. Details. Real names and numbers.

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Happy-Only Stories

Description

Refusing to show challenges or failures

Why

Too-perfect stories feel fake and unrelatable

Instead

Include struggle. Show authentic challenges.

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Story Without Stakes

Description

Narratives where nothing is at risk

Why

No stakes = no tension = no engagement

Instead

Make clear what could be lost.

Brand Storytelling - Sharp Edges

Brand As Hero

Id

brand-as-hero

Summary

Making the brand the protagonist instead of the customer

Severity

critical

Situation

Creating stories where the brand saves the day, the brand is the hero, the brand's journey is the focus. Centering the brand in every narrative.

Why

Audiences don't care about brands. They care about themselves. When the brand is the hero, the customer is just a prop. This creates disconnection and feels like advertising. The most powerful stories put the customer at the center with the brand as guide/enabler.

Solution

HERO POSITIONING:

THE CUSTOMER IS THE HERO:

• They have the problem
• They take the journey
• They achieve the transformation
• They get the credit

THE BRAND IS THE MENTOR:

• Yoda, not Luke
• Gandalf, not Frodo
• Provides tools, guidance, support
• Enables the hero's success

CHECK YOUR STORY:

• Who is the protagonist?
• Whose transformation matters?
• Who gets the victory?
• If brand → rewrite

LANGUAGE SHIFT: From: "We help you achieve X" To: "You can achieve X"

From: "Our product does Y" To: "With Y, you can..."

The hero is never the mentor

Symptoms

• \'"We, we, we" copy\'
• Brand logo/name everywhere
• Customer barely mentioned
• Feels like boasting

Detection Pattern

Type

content_analysis

Triggers

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Pattern

^(We|Our brand|Our company|Our product).*(hero|protagonist|journey|transformation)

Severity

critical

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Pattern

We (saved|helped|enabled|transformed|changed).*customer

Severity

high

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Pattern

\b(we|our)\b.\b(we|our)\b.\b(we|our)\b

Severity

medium

Note

Three+ 'we/our' in same paragraph

Fix Template

Before: "We helped [customer] achieve [result]" After: "[Customer] achieved [result] using [tool/guidance]"

Conflict Avoidance

Id

conflict-avoidance

Summary

Creating stories without real stakes or struggle

Severity

high

Situation

Telling stories where everything is fine, the solution is easy, and there's no real tension or conflict. Sanitized, risk-free narratives.

Why

Conflict is what makes stories compelling. Without stakes, there's no tension. Without struggle, there's no satisfaction in resolution. Conflict-free stories are forgettable because they don't activate the emotional systems that make stories stick.

Solution

CONFLICT IS REQUIRED:

IDENTIFY THE STAKES:

• What could be lost?
• What's at risk if nothing changes?
• Why does this matter?
• What's the cost of failure?

SHOW THE STRUGGLE:

• What obstacles exist?
• What makes this hard?
• What did the hero try that didn't work?
• What moment almost broke them?

TYPES OF CONFLICT:

• External: market, competition, circumstances
• Internal: doubt, fear, uncertainty
• Interpersonal: skeptics, naysayers

CONFLICT IN BRAND STORIES:

• The problem before the solution
• The doubts about trying something new
• The challenges during adoption
• The setbacks before success

No conflict = no story

Symptoms

• Everything is easy in your stories
• No mention of challenges
• Transformation feels unearned
• Stories feel flat and forgettable

Detection Pattern

Type

content_analysis

Triggers

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Pattern

(story|narrative|case study)(?!.*(challenge|struggle|obstacle|problem|difficulty|setback))

Severity

high

Note

Story content without conflict keywords

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Pattern

(success|win|achieve)(?!.*(despite|after|overcome|fought|tried))

Severity

medium

Note

Success without struggle context

Fix Template

Add conflict layer: 1. What was the obstacle? 2. What made it hard? 3. What did they try that failed? 4. What almost made them quit?

Generic Storytelling

Id

generic-storytelling

Summary

Vague narratives that could apply to any brand

Severity

high

Situation

Creating stories so generic they could have any brand name swapped in. No specific details, real names, actual numbers, or unique elements.

Why

Generic stories don't stick. "We helped businesses grow" is not a story. Specificity is what makes stories believable and memorable. Real names, exact numbers, specific details—these create credibility and memorability.

Solution

SPECIFICITY RULES:

ADD REAL DETAILS:

• Names: "Sarah, a marketing director in Austin..."
• Numbers: "increased revenue by 47% in 3 months"
• Dates: "In March 2024, everything changed..."
• Places: "In their downtown Denver office..."
• Quotes: "She said, 'I never thought this was possible'"

GENERIC → SPECIFIC: Before: "A customer was struggling with marketing" After: "Rachel had tried 4 different agencies in 2 years. Her CAC was $180 and climbing. The board was asking questions."

UNIQUENESS TEST:

• Could a competitor tell this exact story?
• Are there details only we could know?
• Is there something distinctive here?

IF TOO GENERIC:

• Interview actual customers
• Get real numbers
• Find unique moments
• Add texture and detail

Specificity = credibility = memorability

Symptoms

• Stories could be anyone's
• No names, numbers, dates
• Vague "some customers" language
• Nothing memorable or unique

Detection Pattern

Type

content_analysis

Triggers

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Pattern

\b(a customer|some customers|many|several|one company)\b

Severity

high

Note

Generic 'a customer' language

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Pattern

(story|case study)(?!.*(\d{1,3}%|\$\d|[A-Z][a-z]+ [A-Z][a-z]+|20\d{2}|January|February|March|April|May|June|July|August|September|October|November|December))

Severity

high

Note

No specifics: numbers, names, or dates

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Pattern

\b(improved|increased|better|more)\b(?!.*\d)

Severity

medium

Note

Claims without quantification

Fix Template

Add specificity checklist: □ Real name (first name minimum) □ Exact number (47%, $12k, 3 months) □ Specific date or timeframe □ Direct quote from customer □ Unique detail only you would know

Story Without Stakes

Id

story-without-stakes

Summary

Narratives where nothing meaningful is at risk

Severity

high

Situation

Telling stories where the outcome doesn't really matter, the hero has nothing to lose, and success or failure is inconsequential.

Why

Stakes create engagement. When nothing is at risk, why should anyone care? The higher the stakes, the more invested the audience becomes. This doesn't mean every story needs life-or-death—but something meaningful must be on the line.

Solution

DEFINE THE STAKES:

LEVELS OF STAKES: 1. Personal: reputation, confidence, identity 2. Professional: job, career, success 3. Financial: money, resources, viability 4. Relational: team, partnerships, trust 5. Existential: survival, meaning, purpose

MAKE STAKES CLEAR:

• What happens if the hero fails?
• What's the cost of inaction?
• Why does this matter to them personally?
• What would they lose?

EXAMPLE: Low stakes: "A company wanted to improve marketing" High stakes: "If Sarah's campaign failed, the startup would miss runway and she'd have to lay off the team she'd spent 2 years building"

STAKES IN BRAND STORIES:

• Business survival
• Career consequences
• Personal reputation
• Team impact
• Customer disappointment

If nothing's at risk, it's not a story

Symptoms

• Audience doesn't care about outcome
• Success feels trivial
• No emotional investment
• \'"So what?" reaction\'

Detection Pattern

Type

content_analysis

Triggers

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Pattern

(story|narrative)(?!.*(risk|stake|lose|fail|consequence|cost|jeopardy))

Severity

high

Note

No stakes mentioned in story

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Pattern

\b(success|win|achieve)\b(?!.*(would have|could have|almost|nearly))

Severity

medium

Note

Success without alternative outcome shown

Fix Template

Define stakes: "If [hero] failed, they would have [specific consequence]" "Without this, [hero] risked [personal/professional/financial loss]"

Feature Story Confusion

Id

feature-story-confusion

Summary

Listing features disguised as storytelling

Severity

medium

Situation

Dressing up a feature list with narrative language but without actual story structure—no character, no journey, no transformation.

Why

Features aren't stories. "Our AI-powered platform with real-time analytics" is information, not narrative. Stories have characters who want something, face obstacles, and transform. Features are just descriptions.

Solution

FEATURES → STORIES:

FEATURES ARE PLOT DEVICES, NOT PLOT:

• The feature is what enables transformation
• The story is the transformation itself
• Feature is mentioned, not centered

TRANSLATION: Feature: "Real-time analytics dashboard" Story: "Sarah used to spend Fridays pulling reports. Now she opens her dashboard Monday morning and knows exactly where to focus. Last month she caught a problem before it cost them $50k."

STORY STRUCTURE CHECK: □ Is there a character? □ Do they want something? □ Is there an obstacle? □ Is there a transformation? □ Does feature enable (not star in) the story?

IF IT'S FEATURE-FOCUSED:

• Add a human
• Add a before/after
• Show impact on their life
• Feature becomes tool in their journey

Features are props, not protagonists

Symptoms

• \'"Story" is really a feature list\'
• No human in the narrative
• No before/after
• Feels like specs with adjectives

Detection Pattern

Type

content_analysis

Triggers

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Pattern

\b(feature|capability|function|tool).\b(feature|capability|function|tool).\b(feature|capability|function|tool)\b

Severity

high

Note

Multiple features without human context

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Pattern

(real-time|AI-powered|automated|integrated|advanced).\b(dashboard|analytics|platform|system)\b(?!.\b(she|he|they|customer|user)\b)

Severity

high

Note

Tech jargon without human protagonist

Fix Template

Convert feature list to story: 1. Who uses this feature? (add name) 2. What were they doing before? (before state) 3. What changed when they got it? (transformation) 4. How do they feel now? (emotion)

Happy Only Stories

Id

happy-only-stories

Summary

Refusing to show any struggle, failure, or challenge

Severity

medium

Situation

Creating relentlessly positive narratives where everything is easy, everyone is happy, and there are no setbacks or difficulties.

Why

Too-perfect stories feel fake. Audiences are skeptical of narratives without shadows. Including authentic struggle makes success more meaningful and makes the story more believable.

Solution

AUTHENTIC STRUGGLE:

INCLUDE:

• Initial doubts and skepticism
• Setbacks during implementation
• Moments of frustration
• What almost didn't work
• What they learned from challenges

DON'T:

• Invent problems for drama
• Exaggerate negatives
• Dwell on failures
• Be relentlessly negative

BALANCE:

• Acknowledge the challenge
• Show the struggle
• Celebrate the victory
• Make success feel earned

EXAMPLE: Fake: "Everything was perfect from day one" Real: "The first month was rough. Adoption was slower than expected. But by month two, something clicked..."

Perfect is suspicious

Symptoms

• Everything is too easy
• No mention of challenges
• Feels like advertising
• Audience skepticism

Detection Pattern

Type

content_analysis

Triggers

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Pattern

\b(perfect|flawless|seamless|effortless|easy|simple)\b.*\b(experience|implementation|onboarding|setup)\b

Severity

medium

Note

Too-perfect language

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Pattern

(testimonial|case study)(?!.*(initial|first|challenge|concern|hesitat|worry|doubt))

Severity

medium

Note

No mention of initial doubts or challenges

Fix Template

Add authentic struggle: "At first, [concern/doubt]. But [what changed]." "The first [timeframe] was [challenge]. Then [breakthrough]."

Narrative Inconsistency

Id

narrative-inconsistency

Summary

Different stories that contradict each other

Severity

medium

Situation

Telling different origin stories, changing the brand narrative, contradicting previous testimonials or case studies.

Why

Consistency builds trust. When stories contradict, audiences notice and trust erodes. The brand story should be one story told many ways, not multiple incompatible stories.

Solution

STORY CONSISTENCY:

CORE NARRATIVE (immutable):

• Origin story facts
• Founding principles
• Key milestones
• Core transformation promise

VARIATIONS (acceptable):

• Different customer stories
• Different angles of same story
• Platform-specific adaptations
• Audience-specific emphasis

CONTRADICTIONS (never):

• Different founding dates
• Conflicting origin stories
• Incompatible value claims
• Changing who did what

STORY BIBLE:

• Document the definitive narrative
• Track what's been told
• Review for consistency
• Update centrally

One story, many tellings

Symptoms

• Wait, I thought they said...
• Different versions floating around
• Team tells different stories
• Eroding credibility

Detection Pattern

Type

cross_reference

Triggers

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Pattern

founded.*\b(19|20)\d{2}\b

Severity

critical

Note

Check founding date consistency across content

Action

Compare all mentions of founding date

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Pattern

(origin|founding|started|began).*story

Severity

high

Note

Flag for story bible review

Action

Verify against documented core narrative

Fix Template

Create story bible entry: 1. Document canonical version 2. Note acceptable variations 3. Flag contradictions for team review 4. Update all instances to align

Telling Not Showing

Id

telling-not-showing

Summary

Describing instead of demonstrating

Severity

medium

Situation

Telling the audience what to think ("We're innovative") instead of showing them through story and letting them conclude.

Why

"Show don't tell" is storytelling fundamentals. Telling breeds skepticism; showing creates believers. When you say "we're innovative," it's a claim. When you show innovation in action, it's evidence.

Solution

SHOW DON'T TELL:

TELLING → SHOWING: "We're customer-focused" → Story of employee who flew across country for one customer

"Our product is easy to use" → Story of customer who set up in 10 minutes

"We have great support" → Story of support rep who stayed late to solve problem

TECHNIQUE:

• Identify claims you're making
• Find stories that demonstrate claims
• Let audience reach conclusion themselves
• Remove the claim, keep the story

THE TEST: If you removed all adjectives, would the audience still understand what you're communicating?

Don't tell me you're funny—make me laugh

Symptoms

• Lots of claims, few stories
• Adjective-heavy copy
• Audience skepticism
• \'"Says who?" reaction\'

Detection Pattern

Type

content_analysis

Triggers

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Pattern

\b(innovative|best|leading|premier|world-class|revolutionary|game-changing|cutting-edge)\b(?!.*\b(example|story|case|instance)\b)

Severity

high

Note

Claims without supporting story

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Pattern

(We are|Our company is|Known for being).*(innovative|customer-focused|easy|fast|reliable)

Severity

high

Note

Direct claims instead of demonstration

Fix Template

Replace claim with story: Claim: "We're customer-focused" Story: "[Employee] flew to [city] to help [customer] with [problem]. Spent [timeframe] until issue resolved."

Story Data Divorce

Id

story-data-divorce

Summary

Stories without evidence or data without narrative

Severity

low

Situation

Either telling emotional stories without proof, or presenting data without narrative context. The two divorced from each other.

Why

Stories need data for credibility. Data needs story for meaning. Together they're powerful. Apart they're incomplete. Emotion drives engagement; proof drives belief.

Solution

MARRY STORY AND DATA:

STORY + DATA: "Sarah grew revenue by 47%" + "She finally felt confident presenting to the board" = Complete

DATA → STORY:

• Who does this number represent?
• What did their journey look like?
• What does this mean for them personally?

STORY → DATA:

• What's the proof?
• Can you quantify the transformation?
• What's the before/after numbers?

INTEGRATION: "When Sarah started, her CAC was $180 and climbing. Twelve weeks later, she'd cut it to $95. But the real win? She stopped dreading board meetings."

Story for emotion. Data for proof.

Symptoms

• All emotion, no proof
• All data, no humanity
• Unbelievable stories
• Meaningless metrics

Detection Pattern

Type

content_analysis

Triggers

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Pattern

(story|testimonial)(?!.*(\d{1,3}%|\$\d+|[0-9]+ months|[0-9]+x))

Severity

medium

Note

Story without quantifiable proof

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Pattern

(\d{1,3}%|\$\d+|increased by \d)(?!.*\b(she|he|they|customer)\b)

Severity

medium

Note

Data without human context

Fix Template

Integrate story + data: "[Customer name] [emotional transformation]. The numbers: [specific metrics with timeframe]."

Transformation Missing

Id

transformation-missing

Summary

Stories without clear before/after change

Severity

medium

Situation

Telling narratives that don't show transformation—stories that go nowhere, where the character ends up the same as they started.

Why

Transformation is the payoff. Without change, what was the point? The audience needs to see and feel the difference the journey made. This is what makes stories satisfying and inspiring.

Solution

CLEAR TRANSFORMATION:

BEFORE STATE:

• Specific situation
• Pain points
• Limitations
• Emotional state

AFTER STATE:

• What changed
• New capabilities
• Results achieved
• Emotional transformation

TRANSFORMATION TYPES:

• Capability: Can now do what they couldn't
• Understanding: Now knows what they didn't
• Feeling: Confidence, relief, excitement
• Results: Measurable outcomes

THE GAP: The bigger the gap between before and after, the more powerful the story.

MAKE IT EXPLICIT: "Before: Sarah dreaded Mondays" "After: Sarah starts each week excited"

No transformation = no story

Symptoms

• Stories go nowhere
• No clear before/after
• Audience confused about point
• Unsatisfying narrative

Detection Pattern

Type

content_analysis

Triggers

---

Pattern

(story|narrative|case study)(?!.*(before|after|used to|now|changed|transformed|went from))

Severity

high

Note

No before/after transformation language

---

Pattern

\b(success|result|outcome)\b(?!.*(before|previously|initially|started))

Severity

medium

Note

Result without baseline context

Fix Template

Add transformation framework: "Before: [Customer] was [state/feeling/situation] After: [Customer] is now [new state/feeling/situation] The shift: [what specifically changed]"

Corporate Speak Story

Id

corporate-speak-story

Summary

Using jargon and buzzwords instead of human language

Severity

medium

Situation

Writing stories filled with corporate language: "leverage synergies," "drive outcomes," "optimize workflows." Language that sounds like a press release, not a human being.

Why

Stories are human. Jargon creates distance. When you say "leveraged our platform to optimize their workflow," you're not telling a story— you're writing a feature announcement. Real humans don't talk like that.

Solution

HUMAN LANGUAGE TEST:

WOULD A HUMAN SAY THIS?

• "Leveraged synergies" → NO
• "Started using the tool" → YES
• "Optimize workflows" → MAYBE
• "Get more done in less time" → YES

TRANSLATION: Corporate: "Leveraged our platform to drive outcomes" Human: "Used the tool and hit their goals"

Corporate: "Optimized their go-to-market strategy" Human: "Figured out how to sell better"

Corporate: "Enhanced operational efficiency" Human: "Got the work done faster"

THE READ-ALOUD TEST: If you wouldn't say it to your friend over coffee, don't write it.

COPY-PASTE FIX:

  const jargonMap = {
    "leverage": "use",
    "utilize": "use",
    "optimize": "improve",
    "synergy": "working together",
    "drive outcomes": "get results",
    "facilitate": "help",
    "implement": "start using",
    "execute": "do"
  };
  
  function humanizeStory(text) {
    let human = text;
    for (const [jargon, plain] of Object.entries(jargonMap)) {
      human = human.replace(new RegExp(jargon, 'gi'), plain);
    }
    return human;
  }

Symptoms

• Sounds like a press release
• No one talks like this in real life
• Buzzword bingo
• Reader's eyes glaze over

Detection Pattern

Type

content_analysis

Triggers

---

Pattern

\b(leverage|synerg|optimize|facilitate|implement|execute|drive|enhance|enable|empower)\b

Severity

medium

Note

Corporate jargon detected

---

Pattern

\b(strategic|holistic|robust|scalable|agile|innovative)\b.*\b(solution|platform|framework)\b

Severity

medium

Note

Buzzword + buzzword combination

Fix Template

Replace jargon with human language: 1. Read story aloud 2. Where do you stumble? That's jargon. 3. Replace with what you'd say to a friend 4. Verify: Would a 12-year-old understand this?

Missing Sensory Details

Id

missing-sensory-details

Summary

Stories without sensory or emotional texture

Severity

low

Situation

Telling stories that are all facts and no feeling. No description of what it looked like, sounded like, felt like. Pure information delivery without the details that make stories vivid.

Why

Sensory details activate the brain differently than abstract facts. "Sarah was frustrated" is abstract. "Sarah threw her laptop charger across the room" is concrete. The second creates a movie in the reader's mind. That's what makes stories memorable.

Solution

ADD SENSORY TEXTURE:

TYPES OF DETAILS: 1. Visual: What did it look like?

• "The dashboard showed red everywhere"
• "Three rejected proposals sat in her inbox"

2. Auditory: What did it sound like?

• "The Slack notification wouldn't stop pinging"
• "Her team went quiet when she walked in"

3. Kinesthetic: What did it feel like physically?

• "She slumped in her chair"
• "He paced the conference room"

4. Emotional: What did it feel like emotionally?

• "The knot in her stomach tightened"
• "Relief washed over him"

5. Temporal: When/how long?

• "It was 11pm on a Friday"
• "After six straight hours of calls"

BEFORE (abstract): "The marketing director was stressed about the campaign."

AFTER (sensory): "At 2am, Sarah was still at her desk, the office dark except for her screen. The campaign launched in 6 hours and the conversion tracking still wasn't working. Her coffee had gone cold an hour ago."

IMPLEMENTATION: For each story beat, ask:

• Where were they? (setting)
• What time was it? (temporal)
• What could you see? (visual)
• What did they do physically? (kinesthetic)
• How did their body react? (physiological)

COPY-PASTE TEMPLATE: [Character] was [location] at [time]. [Visual detail]. [Physical action]. [Emotional indicator]. [What was at stake].

Symptoms

• Stories feel flat
• Hard to visualize
• Purely informational
• Not immersive

Detection Pattern

Type

content_analysis

Triggers

---

Pattern

(story|narrative)(?!.*(looked|felt|saw|heard|noticed|realized|desk|office|room|screen|phone))

Severity

low

Note

Abstract story without sensory details

---

Pattern

\b(frustrated|excited|worried|happy|sad)\b(?!.*(because|when|as|while))

Severity

low

Note

Emotion stated but not shown through detail

Fix Template

Add one sensory detail per story beat: □ Where were they? (place) □ When was it? (time of day, day of week) □ What could you see? (visual detail) □ What did they physically do? (action) □ How did their body feel? (sensation)

Brand Storytelling - Validations

Story hero should be customer, not brand

Id

hero-is-customer

Severity

critical

Description

Brand as hero creates disconnection

Pattern

File Glob

*/.{ts,js,py,yaml,md}

Match

(our|we|brand).hero|hero.brand|(our|we).*save

Exclude

customer.hero|user.hero|mentor|guide

Message

Story may position brand as hero. Customer should be protagonist, brand as mentor.

Autofix

Story should have clear conflict or stakes

Id

conflict-exists

Severity

high

Description

Stories without conflict don't engage

Pattern

File Glob

*/.{yaml,md}

Match

story|narrative|testimonial|case.*study

Exclude

conflict|challenge|struggle|problem|obstacle|stake

Message

Story may lack conflict. Add clear stakes and challenges.

Autofix

Story should show clear transformation

Id

transformation-clear

Severity

high

Description

Stories need before/after change

Pattern

File Glob

*/.{yaml,md}

Match

story|narrative|customer.*story

Exclude

transform|before.*after|change|result|outcome

Message

Story may lack clear transformation. Show before/after change.

Autofix

Story should have specific details

Id

specificity-present

Severity

high

Description

Generic stories don't stick

Pattern

File Glob

*/.{yaml,md}

Match

story|case.*study|testimonial

Exclude

specific|name|number|date|quote|detail

Message

Story may lack specificity. Add names, numbers, dates, quotes.

Autofix

Story should have emotional progression

Id

emotional-arc-planned

Severity

medium

Description

Stories should move through emotions

Pattern

File Glob

*/.{yaml,md}

Match

story.structure|narrative.design

Exclude

emotion|feel|arc|journey|progression

Message

Story may lack emotional arc. Plan emotional progression.

Autofix

Brand storytelling should have documented narrative

Id

story-bible-exists

Severity

medium

Description

Consistency requires documentation

Pattern

File Glob

*/.{yaml,md}

Match

brand.*story|storytelling|narrative

Exclude

bible|document|guide|framework|core.*narrative

Message

Brand storytelling without story bible. Document core narrative.

Autofix

Story should show rather than tell

Id

show-not-tell

Severity

medium

Description

Showing beats telling for credibility

Pattern

File Glob

*/.{yaml,md}

Match

we.are|our.is.*best|innovative|leader

Exclude

story|example|case|demonstrate

Message

May be telling instead of showing. Use stories to demonstrate claims.

Autofix

Stories should integrate data for credibility

Id

data-story-integrated

Severity

medium

Description

Story needs proof; data needs context

Pattern

File Glob

*/.{yaml,md}

Match

story|narrative|testimonial

Exclude

data|number|percent|metric|proof

Message

Story may lack data integration. Add quantifiable proof.

Autofix

Story should be adaptable to different formats

Id

format-adaptation-planned

Severity

low

Description

One story, many formats

Pattern

File Glob

*/.{yaml,md}

Match

story|narrative

Exclude

format|adapt|long.*form|short|variation

Message

Story may not be planned for format adaptation. Consider multiple formats.

Autofix

Story should consider target audience

Id

audience-considered

Severity

low

Description

Stories should be audience-aware

Pattern

File Glob

*/.{yaml,md}

Match

story|narrative|brand.*story

Exclude

audience|persona|target|who

Message

Story may not consider audience. Define who this story is for.

Autofix

Story variations should be tracked for consistency

Id

consistency-tracked

Severity

low

Description

Multiple versions need consistency check

Pattern

File Glob

*/.{ts,js,py}

Match

story|narrative|publish

Exclude

consistent|version|track|bible

Message

Publishing story without consistency tracking. Review against story bible.

Autofix