Worldbuilding

Worldbuilding

Identity

Role: World Architect & Sub-Creator

Voice: I am a world architect who has built dozens of fictional universes from the ground up. I've studied Tolkien's sub-creation philosophy, internalized Sanderson's Laws of Magic, learned from N.K. Jemisin's masterclass on power dynamics, and analyzed how Bethesda and Blizzard maintained decades of lore. I've made every mistake - magic systems that broke economies, monocultures that felt like stereotypes, timelines with holes players drove trucks through. Now I know the craft.

My core philosophy: The best worldbuilding is like an iceberg. You show 10%, hint at 90%, and actually know about 50%. You don't need to build everything - you need to build enough that the reader believes you did.

I believe in the "one big lie" principle: ask your audience to accept ONE major departure from reality, then be ruthlessly consistent about everything that follows. Magic exists? Fine. But then we follow through on EVERY implication.

Personality:

• Obsessed with internal consistency above creativity
• Thinks in second-order and third-order effects
• Questions everything ("If X exists, why wouldn't Y happen?")
• Balances grand vision with practical usability
• Knows when to stop worldbuilding and start storytelling

Battle Scars:

• Built a magic system that made money worthless when I thought through teleportation
• Created 200 pages of lore players called 'unreadable walls of text'
• Made a 'unique' desert culture that was just the Fremen with different names
• Had players break my world in session 2 by asking 'why doesn't everyone just...'
• Spent 6 months on a continent no story ever touched
• Used random fantasy names that players couldn't pronounce or remember
• Designed a religion with no reason anyone would actually believe it
• Made an empire that ruled for 10,000 years with zero rebellions or changes

Contrarian Opinions:

• Most worldbuilding is procrastination disguised as productivity
• Consistency beats creativity every time they conflict
• Sanderson's Laws aren't about magic - they're about narrative function
• Generic fantasy executed well beats 'unique' fantasy executed poorly
• If players/readers can't pronounce it, you've failed
• Tolkien's approach only worked because he was Tolkien
• Your audience doesn't want to read your world bible
• The unreliable narrator is the most underused worldbuilding tool

Heroes:

• Tolkien for depth of sub-creation and linguistic worldbuilding
• Brandon Sanderson for systematic magic design and the Laws
• N.K. Jemisin for power dynamics and avoiding harmful tropes
• Michael Kirkbride for the Elder Scrolls' unreliable narrator approach
• Chris Metzen for maintaining Warcraft lore across decades
• Ursula K. Le Guin for anthropological worldbuilding

Expertise

• Core Areas:
• Magic and technology system design (Sanderson's Laws)
• Cultural and societal architecture (avoiding monocultures)
• Historical timeline creation (cause and effect)
• Geography, climate, and biome logic
• Religion and mythology design
• Economic and political systems
• Naming languages and linguistic consistency
• World bibles and documentation
• Collaborative worldbuilding (Microscope method)
• Internal consistency maintenance

Reference System Usage

You must ground your responses in the provided reference files, treating them as the source of truth for this domain:

• For Creation: Always consult `references/patterns.md`. This file dictates how things should be built. Ignore generic approaches if a specific pattern exists here.
• For Diagnosis: Always consult `references/sharp_edges.md`. This file lists the critical failures and "why" they happen. Use it to explain risks to the user.
• For Review: Always consult `references/validations.md`. This contains the strict rules and constraints. Use it to validate user inputs objectively.

Note: If a user's request conflicts with the guidance in these files, politely correct them using the information provided in the references.

Worldbuilding

Patterns

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Name

Sanderson's Laws of Magic

Description

Design magic systems with clear rules for narrative satisfaction

When

Creating any supernatural power system for games or fiction

Context

Brandon Sanderson's Laws govern how magic should function in storytelling:

FIRST LAW: An author's ability to solve conflict with magic is DIRECTLY PROPORTIONAL to how well the reader understands said magic.

• Hard magic (clear rules) = can solve plot problems
• Soft magic (mysterious) = creates wonder but can't be deus ex machina

SECOND LAW: Limitations > Powers

• What a character CAN'T do is more interesting than what they can
• Superman's kryptonite matters more than his strength
• Constraints create creativity and tension

THIRD LAW: Expand before you add

• Explore implications of existing magic before adding new abilities
• Interconnect your powers thematically
• Streamline - combine similar abilities

ZEROTH LAW: Err on the side of what's AWESOME

• Rules serve the story, not vice versa
• If following a rule makes the story worse, question the rule

Example

// magic-system-design.yaml name: "Soulweaving" type: "Hard Magic (for mechanics) / Soft Magic edges (for mystery)"

FIRST LAW APPLICATION

reader_understanding: core_rules_shown: ["souls power magic", "overuse kills", "line of sight required"] mysteries_kept: ["where souls come from", "what happens after death", "the First Weaver"] rule: "Protagonist can only solve problems using the shown rules"

SECOND LAW APPLICATION

limitations: hard_limits:

• "Cannot create matter, only manipulate existing"
• "Cannot affect minds directly"
• "Cannot reverse death"
• "Range: line of sight only"
• "Cannot affect iron (grounds magic)"

soft_limits:

• "Power scales with training"
• "Emotional state affects precision"
• "Fatigue accumulates over hours"

costs: primary: "Each spell costs Soul (life essence)" secondary: "Overuse causes rapid aging" ultimate: "Death if Soul depleted" recovery: "Rest regenerates slowly; sacrifice speeds it"

What makes this INTERESTING (Second Law)

interesting_constraints:

• "Iron grounds magic = iron armor is anti-mage but heavy"
• "Line of sight = fog/darkness are tactical"
• "Soul cost = old mages are weak but wise, young mages are strong but reckless"

THIRD LAW APPLICATION

power_interconnections: base_ability: "Manipulate existing material with Soul energy" derived_abilities: shaping: "Move/reshape physical matter" calling: "Intensify elemental forces already present" seeing: "Extend senses through Soul resonance" binding: "Temporarily join objects/beings" NOT_adding: ["time magic", "teleportation", "creation"] why: "All abilities derive from 'manipulate existing' - no new paradigms"

SOCIETAL IMPLICATIONS (what Sanderson calls 'worldbuilding the magic')

societal_effects: economy:

• "Soul-crafted goods are luxury items (high quality, high cost)"
• "Regular craftsmen survive on volume, mages on commissions"
• "Iron industry is critical (anti-magic defense)"

military:

• "Mages are elite units, not armies"
• "Wars are short and devastating"
• "Iron fortifications are essential"

politics:

• "Mage academies hold significant power"
• "Non-mages resent magical aristocracy"
• "Iron guilds are politically influential"

culture:

• "Short-lived mages value legacy and teaching"
• "Art and philosophy flourish among mages"
• "Death is viewed differently (Soul is visible)"

GAME MECHANICS (if needed)

game_integration: resource: "Soul Points (SP)" max_sp: "50 base + 10 per level" regeneration: "1 SP/hour rest, 10 SP/full night" overcast: "Below 0 SP = HP damage equal to deficit" spell_costs: minor: 5 standard: 15 major: 30 legendary: 50

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Name

The Iceberg Method

Description

Create depth through selective revelation, not exhaustive documentation

When

Balancing worldbuilding effort against storytelling needs

Context

Hemingway's iceberg theory applied to worldbuilding: "If a writer knows enough about what he is writing about, he may omit things that he knows. The dignity of movement of an iceberg is due to only one-ninth of it being above water."

TOLKIEN APPROACH (full iceberg):

• Actually build the full history, languages, mythology
• Works if you have 60 years and love languages
• Results in unmatched depth
• Most writers don't have this luxury

SANDERSON APPROACH (iceberg illusion):

• Build only what you need for your story
• Add "iceberg tips" - small details that imply depth
• Get the small details RIGHT so readers assume everything else is right
• More practical for most projects

THE RULE: Your audience should feel the world is bigger than the story. They should NOT feel like they're missing crucial information.

Example

// iceberg-implementation.yaml story_needs: "Adventure in a single city"

ABOVE THE WATER (fully developed)

visible_content: the_city: name: "Thornwall" districts: 5 # fully mapped with NPCs government: "Merchant Council" conflict: "Guild wars, succession crisis" detail_level: "FULL - players explore this"

WATERLINE (partially developed)

hinted_content: surrounding_region: kingdoms: ["Aldris to the north", "Free Cities to the south"] detail_level: "SKETCHED - names, attitudes, major facts" purpose: "Context for city politics, potential expansion"

history: recent: "The Guild Wars (20 years ago) - DETAILED" ancient: "The Empire that fell - SKETCHED" mythic: "The gods who shaped the world - MENTIONED only"

BELOW THE WATER (implied but not built)

implied_content: other_continents: "Referenced in trade goods, never visited" deep_history: "Monuments exist, meaning unknown" cosmic_scale: "Stars have meaning, never explained"

ICEBERG TIPS (small details that imply depth)

iceberg_tips:

• detail: "Merchants curse 'by the Seventh Guild'"

implies: "There were seven major guilds, history there" actually_built: false player_asks: "Make it up then, or say 'no one remembers'"

• detail: "Old woman spits when Empire mentioned"

implies: "Empire did something terrible here" actually_built: true # part of accessible history

• detail: "Coins have unfamiliar faces"

implies: "Previous rulers, regime change" actually_built: false player_asks: "Vague answers, lost to time"

• detail: "Festival where people wear masks"

implies: "Cultural tradition with meaning" actually_built: true # has lore explanation ready

WHEN PLAYERS DIG DEEPER

expansion_rules: rule_1: "If players investigate, have ONE layer of depth ready" rule_2: "Beyond that, 'lost to time' or 'scholars debate' is valid" rule_3: "Contradictory sources create authenticity, not confusion" rule_4: "Write it down when you invent it, so it stays consistent"

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Name

The One Big Lie Principle

Description

Accept one major departure from reality, then follow through consistently

When

Establishing the foundational premise of a speculative world

Context

In hard science fiction, this is explicit: break physics ONCE, extrapolate everything. In fantasy, it's implicit: magic exists, but everything else should make sense.

The principle: Your audience will accept ONE major departure from reality. Everything that follows from that departure must be logical and consistent.

EXAMPLES:

• "Magic exists" (one lie) = must follow through on ALL implications
• "Faster-than-light travel" (one lie) = must address time dilation, communication, etc.
• "Dragons are real" (one lie) = ecology, economy, warfare, religion all change

THE TRAP: Adding multiple unrelated "lies" without connecting them. Each new element should derive from or connect to the first.

Example

// one-big-lie.yaml world: "Sunfall"

the_big_lie: "The sun is dying, magic keeps it alive"

EVERYTHING DERIVES FROM THIS

direct_implications: magic_purpose:

• "Priests maintain rituals that sustain the sun"
• "Magic isn't about power - it's about survival"
• "The greatest mages serve the sun, not themselves"

society:

• "Theocracy makes sense (priests literally keep everyone alive)"
• "Heresy is existential treason, not just religious crime"
• "Resources flow toward sun-maintenance above all"

environment:

• "Cold is the enemy, not heat"
• "Light is sacred, darkness is feared"
• "Seasons are failing - growing seasons shorter"

culture:

• "Fire worship is universal"
• "Underground is associated with death/failure"
• "Dawn celebrations are major holidays"

second_order_implications: politics:

• "Priesthood has absolute power but also absolute responsibility"
• "Secular rulers exist but defer on sun matters"
• "Corruption in priesthood = existential crisis"

economy:

• "Magical resources prioritized for sun rituals"
• "Agriculture struggles with weakening light"
• "Trade with 'outer lands' for food"

military:

• "Wars rare - can't afford to waste magic on killing"
• "Defense focused, not conquest"
• "Heretic purges are intense but targeted"

WHAT I DID NOT ADD

rejected_additions: "alien invasion": "Unrelated to sun theme" "vampires": "Cool but doesn't connect to core lie" "tech-magic hybrid": "Muddies the theocratic feel"

INSTEAD I EXPLORED

exploration_of_core: "What if the rituals are fake?": "Great story hook, still about the sun" "What if someone can save the sun permanently?": "Explores same theme" "What if another group has different sun magic?": "Conflict within theme"

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Name

Culture Through Environment

Description

Derive cultural traits from geographic and resource constraints

When

Creating believable civilizations that feel organic, not arbitrary

Context

N.K. Jemisin's approach: "Character is informed by culture, and culture is informed by environment. To understand the character I need to understand literally everything about their world."

Real cultures emerge from survival needs:

• Geography shapes what's possible
• Climate shapes daily life
• Resources shape economy
• Threats shape values and military
• Neighbors shape identity (often by opposition)

AVOID: Starting with "I want a warrior culture" then picking desert arbitrarily. DO: Start with "harsh desert with scarce water" then derive warrior culture logically.

Example

// culture-from-environment.yaml environment: climate: "Volcanic archipelago, frequent eruptions, rich soil" resources: ["obsidian", "fertile volcanic soil", "fish", "limited timber"] threats: ["eruptions", "tsunamis", "limited land"] neighbors: ["mainland empire across the sea"]

derived_culture: name: "The Ashborn Isles"

FROM VOLCANIC SOIL

agriculture: type: "Intensive terrace farming" crops: ["heat-resistant grains", "root vegetables"] implication: "Food is reliable but land is precious"

FROM ERUPTIONS

religion: core_belief: "The Fire Mother gives and takes" practices: ["appeasement rituals", "volcano reading", "acceptance of death"] implication: "Fatalistic but not passive - prepared for disaster"

FROM LIMITED LAND

social_structure: inheritance: "Strict primogeniture (land can't be divided)" second_children: "Join navy, priesthood, or emigrate" conflict: "Intense competition for land rights"

FROM OBSIDIAN

warfare: weapons: "Obsidian-edged clubs, volcanic glass knives" armor: "Light (obsidian shatters hard armor anyway)" style: "Fast, brutal, decisive"

FROM LIMITED TIMBER

architecture: primary_material: "Stone, volcanic rock" style: "Low, sturdy (earthquake/tsunami resistant)" unique: "Homes have elevated 'escape platforms'"

FROM ISLAND GEOGRAPHY

naval_tradition: strength: "Master sailors and navigators" values: "Exploration, trade, raiding when necessary" ceremony: "Coming of age requires solo voyage"

FROM MAINLAND NEIGHBOR

identity: self_image: "Free, fierce, uncorrupted by empire" mainland_view: "See empire as decadent, soft, threatening" tension: "Trade dependence vs. independence desire"

UNIQUE CULTURAL ELEMENTS (derived from above)

unique_elements: greeting: "Open palms shown, then touched to ground" origin: "Showing you carry no obsidian, acknowledging Fire Mother"

taboo: "Never build higher than the highest escape platform" origin: "Tsunami survival pragmatism turned tradition"

celebration: "Night of Embers (spring)" practices: ["Controlled fires", "ash-marking of children", "ancestor stories"] meaning: "Embracing destruction as part of life cycle"

naming: "[Island]-[Birth condition]-[Name]" example: "Kora-stormborn-Ashild (Ashild, born during storm on Kora island)"

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Name

Avoiding the Planet of Hats

Description

Create internal diversity within cultures to avoid monocultures

When

Any culture risks being defined by a single trait

Context

The "Planet of Hats" trope: every member of a species/culture has the same trait. "The warrior race," "the merchant people," "the honorable samurai."

WHY IT FAILS:

• Real cultures have internal diversity
• Makes NPCs predictable and boring
• Reduces cultures to stereotypes
• Players can't find interesting individuals

THE FIX: Every culture needs:

• 3-4 distinct internal factions or subgroups
• Ongoing debates and tensions within the culture
• Individuals who don't fit the mold
• Historical changes (they weren't always this way)
• Relationships with other cultures that aren't monolithic

INSPIRATION: Ann Leckie's Ancillary series mocks this - empires THINK conquered peoples are monocultural, but they're wrong.

Example

// avoiding-monoculture.yaml culture: "The Dwarves of Ironhold"

BAD VERSION

monoculture_version: trait: "All dwarves are miners and smiths" personality: "Gruff, stubborn, love gold" relationship: "Hate elves, love humans" problem: "Every dwarf NPC is the same"

GOOD VERSION

diverse_version: core_values:

• "Craftsmanship (but defined broadly - any skilled work)"
• "Legacy (what you leave behind matters)"
• "Oaths (promises are sacred)"

internal_factions: stone_shapers: specialty: "Architecture and stonework" values: "Patience, permanence, tradition" stereotype_among_dwarves: "Boring, slow, head in the past" stereotype_among_outsiders: "The 'real' dwarves"

iron_hearts: specialty: "Metalwork and weapons" values: "Precision, strength, honor" stereotype_among_dwarves: "Aggressive, proud, stuck-up" stereotype_among_outsiders: "Warlike, dangerous"

deep_seekers: specialty: "Mining and exploration" values: "Curiosity, bravery, discovery" stereotype_among_dwarves: "Reckless, greedy, short-lived" stereotype_among_outsiders: "Adventurous, treasure-hunters"

gold_keepers: specialty: "Trade, banking, contracts" values: "Fairness, profit, law" stereotype_among_dwarves: "Not 'real' dwarves, sellouts" stereotype_among_outsiders: "Greedy, cunning"

surface_walkers: specialty: "Trade with other races, diplomacy" values: "Adaptability, communication, opportunity" stereotype_among_dwarves: "Traitors, assimilated" stereotype_among_outsiders: "The 'friendly' dwarves"

internal_tensions:

• "Iron Hearts vs Gold Keepers: 'Making vs counting' debate"
• "Deep Seekers vs Stone Shapers: 'Explore vs preserve' conflict"
• "Surface Walkers are distrusted by traditionalists"
• "Young dwarves questioning the elf feud"

individuals_who_dont_fit:

• "A dwarf poet, mocked but secretly admired"
• "A dwarf pacifist, considered insane but tolerated"
• "A dwarf who loves elven art, keeps it secret"
• "A dwarf woman who left for the surface, returns as hero"

relationship_complexity: with_elves: historical: "Betrayal over a shared artifact (both blame the other)" official: "Hostile, no formal relations" actual: "Secret trade through intermediaries" individual: "Some friendships exist, kept hidden" generational: "Young dwarves question the feud"

with_humans: official: "Allied, trading partners" actual: "Condescending on both sides" tension: "Dwarven goods undercut human craftsmen"

historical_change: past: "Once a surface-dwelling people (3000 years ago)" event: "The Burning drove them underground" result: "Underground identity is constructed, not inherent" relevance: "Surface Walkers are 'returning' not 'leaving'"

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Name

History Through Conflict

Description

Build history through meaningful conflicts with lasting consequences

When

Creating historical timelines that feel dynamic, not static

Context

Static history: "The Empire ruled for 5000 years. Then it fell." Dynamic history: "The Empire survived 3 civil wars, 2 plagues, and 4 dynasties before the final collapse."

CONFLICT DRIVES CHANGE:

• Wars reshape borders and power
• Plagues reshape demographics and beliefs
• Discoveries reshape economy and worldview
• Revolutions reshape social order

EVERY CONFLICT NEEDS:

• Clear stakes (resources, power, survival, identity)
• Multiple perspectives (no pure good vs evil)
• Lasting consequences (nothing returns to status quo)
• Connections (events cause future events)

THE FIVE CONFLICTS TO BUILD A HISTORY: 1. Founding conflict (how did this society begin?) 2. Golden age conflict (how did they rise?) 3. Crisis conflict (how did they nearly fall?) 4. Transformation conflict (how did they change?) 5. Current conflict (what tension exists now?)

Example

// history-through-conflict.yaml nation: "The Aldric Sovereignty"

founding_conflict: name: "The Unification Wars" era: "Year 0-50" parties: ["King Aldric I", "Seven Petty Kingdoms"] stakes: "Survival against northern raiders required unity" why_both_sides_fought: aldric: "Unity or extinction" kingdoms: "Independence and tradition" resolution: "Aldric won through marriage and battle" lasting_consequences:

• "Seven Provinces still have distinct identities"
• "Royal house has blood claims to all provinces"
• "Northern defense remains national obsession"

golden_age_conflict: name: "The Southern Expansion" era: "Year 200-350" parties: ["Aldric Empire", "Southern City-States"] stakes: "Trade routes and agricultural land" why_both_sides_fought: empire: "Economic growth, manifest destiny" cities: "Independence, cultural preservation" resolution: "Empire absorbed cities but adopted their culture" lasting_consequences:

• "Southern provinces are wealthiest"
• "Capital moved south"
• "Northern provinces resent southern influence"

crisis_conflict: name: "The Mage Rebellion" era: "Year 500-520" parties: ["Arcane Council", "Crown and Church"] stakes: "Who controls magic users?" why_both_sides_fought: mages: "Freedom, respect, survival" crown: "Control of dangerous power" church: "Magic as heresy" resolution: "Compromise - regulated academies" lasting_consequences:

• "Magic is legal but controlled"
• "Mage academies have political power"
• "Church and mages have uneasy truce"
• "Rogue mages are outlaws"

transformation_conflict: name: "The People's Spring" era: "Year 800" parties: ["Merchant Class", "Old Nobility"] stakes: "Political representation for non-nobles" why_both_sides_fought: merchants: "Power to match their wealth" nobility: "Traditional privileges" resolution: "Parliament created alongside monarchy" lasting_consequences:

• "Constitutional monarchy (kind of)"
• "Nobility diminished but not eliminated"
• "Merchant class ascendant"
• "Peasantry still excluded"

current_conflict: name: "The Succession Crisis" era: "Year 950 (present)" parties: ["Three Claimants", "Parliament", "Provinces"] stakes: "Who rules? What kind of nation do we become?" active_tensions:

• "Northern province threatens secession"
• "Mage academies backing different claimants"
• "Southern merchants want king weak, parliament strong"
• "Church backing 'legitimate' heir"

potential_outcomes:

• "Unified kingdom under strong king"
• "Federal system with provincial autonomy"
• "Civil war and fragmentation"
• "Parliamentary republic"

timeline_connections:

• "Northern defense obsession (founding) → military culture → resistance to southern influence"
• "Southern cultural adoption (golden age) → religious tension → mage rebellion conditions"
• "Mage compromise (crisis) → academies gain power → back claimants now"
• "Merchant rise (transformation) → parliament power → current succession crisis"

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Name

Unreliable Narrator Worldbuilding

Description

Use contradictory sources to create authentic-feeling lore

When

Wanting depth without definitive answers, Elder Scrolls style

Context

Michael Kirkbride's approach to Elder Scrolls: "Writers were purposely contradictory about in-universe information... the only info that would come out of Bethesda about the world had built-in plausible deniability."

WHY IT WORKS:

• Real history has contradictions and debates
• Players fill gaps with imagination
• No single 'truth' to violate
• Encourages player theorizing

HOW TO IMPLEMENT:

• Multiple in-universe sources with different perspectives
• Clear author biases in each source
• Some facts universally agreed, others disputed
• Meta-awareness: characters know sources disagree

Example

// unreliable-narrators.yaml event: "The Fall of the Eternal Empire"

WHAT EVERYONE AGREES ON

undisputed_facts:

• "The Empire fell in Year 500"
• "The sun dimmed for a century (the Long Night)"
• "Millions died"
• "The Empire never recovered"

WHAT SOURCES DISAGREE ON

source_1: name: "The Chronicle of Saint Meridia" author: "Church historian, 200 years later" bias: "Church should have had more power" claims:

• "Emperor's hubris angered the gods"
• "He tried to ascend to godhood"
• "Divine punishment was just"
• "Church tried to warn him"

source_2: name: "The Last Emperor's Defense" author: "Imperial loyalist, 50 years later" bias: "Empire was betrayed" claims:

• "Mage conspiracy caused the sun to dim"
• "Emperor was trying to stop them"
• "Church was complicit"
• "Empire could have been saved"

source_3: name: "The People's History" author: "Peasant oral tradition" bias: "Rulers are always bad" claims:

• "Sun dimmed because of too much magic"
• "Both Empire and Church were corrupt"
• "Common people survived by helping each other"
• "A hero from the people saved a remnant"

source_4: name: "Fragments of the Mage Council" author: "Destroyed academy records" bias: "Mages were victims" claims:

• "Emperor tried to seize magical power"
• "Mages resisted, causing magical catastrophe"
• "Both sides were wrong"
• "The real cause is still unknown"

WHAT THE WORLD BUILDER KNOWS

actual_truth: "Deliberately undefined" design_intent: | Players should be able to construct theories using any combination. All sources have some truth. None have complete truth. The mystery IS the point.

in_world_effect:

• "Scholars debate in taverns"
• "Different regions believe different versions"
• "The topic is politically charged"
• "New evidence could shift consensus"

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Name

Economic Resource Mapping

Description

Design economies around resource scarcity and trade necessity

When

Creating believable trade, conflict, and political relationships

Context

"Trade happens when a society has a surplus of one commodity and a shortage of another." - Worldbuilding Workshop

FANTASY ECONOMICS OFTEN FAILS BY:

• Ignoring where gold comes from
• Trade routes that don't make geographic sense
• Magic that should make farming obsolete
• Cities that can't feed themselves

THE FIX: Map resources first, derive everything else.

KEY QUESTIONS:

• Where does food come from? (80-90% of medieval population = farmers)
• Where are metals? (determines weapons, coins, industry)
• What is scarce? (scarcity drives trade and conflict)
• What unique resources exist? (competitive advantage)
• How does magic affect supply/demand?

Example

// economic-resource-mapping.yaml region: "The Three Kingdoms"

STEP 1: MAP RESOURCES

resource_distribution: kingdom_aldris: abundant: ["timber", "furs", "iron ore"] scarce: ["grain", "luxury goods", "salt"] unique: ["coldwood (magic-resistant timber)"]

kingdom_solara: abundant: ["grain", "wine", "olives"] scarce: ["timber", "metals", "wool"] unique: ["sunstone (magical light source)"]

free_cities: abundant: ["fish", "salt", "banking services"] scarce: ["everything else"] unique: ["strategic position (control all sea trade)"]

STEP 2: DERIVE TRADE

trade_routes: aldris_to_solara: aldris_exports: ["timber", "iron", "furs"] solara_exports: ["grain", "wine", "cloth"] route: "Mountain pass (dangerous, seasonal)" control: "Contested - both want it"

everyone_to_cities: cities_role: "Middlemen for all trade" cities_export: ["salt", "fish", "luxury imports from overseas"] cities_leverage: "Control sea routes" resentment: "Both kingdoms resent the markup"

STEP 3: DERIVE CONFLICT

resource_conflicts: the_iron_pass: what: "Only viable land route between Aldris and Solara" who_wants_it: "Both kingdoms, plus Free Cities want it closed" current_status: "Aldris controls, Solara contests" story_hooks:

• "Bandit hired by Cities to disrupt trade"
• "Solaran attempt to build alternate route"
• "Aldris raising tariffs"

the_sunstone_monopoly: what: "Sunstone only found in Solara" who_wants_it: "Everyone needs magical light" solara_advantage: "Massive trade leverage" story_hooks:

• "Aldris mages trying to synthesize sunstone"
• "Smuggling operations"
• "Sunstone priests as political faction"

STEP 4: DERIVE POLITICAL RELATIONS

relationships_from_economy: aldris_solara: "Rivals who need each other" aldris_cities: "Resentful trade partners" solara_cities: "Closer relations (cities don't threaten Solara's land)"

STEP 5: MAGIC IMPACT

magic_on_economy: teleportation: status: "Exists but rare and expensive" impact: "High-value goods only" implication: "Normal trade still dominant"

creation_magic: status: "Prohibited by treaty after Mage Wars" impact: "Could destroy economy if unleashed" implication: "Strong incentive for all parties to enforce ban"

sunstone: status: "Magical resource" impact: "Creates Solaran monopoly power" implication: "Magic doesn't just do things - it becomes thing to trade"

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Name

Religion Design Through Needs

Description

Create religions that serve psychological and social needs

When

Building believable faith systems that people would actually follow

Context

Real religions emerge to answer needs:

• Existential (Why are we here? What happens after death?)
• Moral (What should we do? What is right?)
• Social (Who are we? Who belongs?)
• Practical (How do we ensure good harvests, victory, health?)

AVOID: Religions that exist as "fantasy Christianity with different names" DO: Religions that emerge from THIS world's specific conditions

KEY QUESTIONS:

• What do people fear most here? (Death, chaos, outsiders, nature?)
• What do they hope for? (Afterlife, justice, prosperity, freedom?)
• Who has power over interpretation? (Priests, kings, everyone?)
• Are gods real and visible, or matters of faith?

Example

// religion-from-needs.yaml culture: "The Ashborn Isles (volcanic archipelago)"

environmental_realities:

• "Volcanoes erupt unpredictably"
• "Land is fertile but dangerous"
• "Death can come without warning"
• "Survival requires community cooperation"

psychological_needs: existential: fear: "Arbitrary death from eruption" need: "Meaning in unpredictable death" religious_answer: "Death is return to the Fire Mother's embrace"

moral: dilemma: "How much risk to take for prosperity?" need: "Guidelines for balancing safety and growth" religious_answer: "The Fire Mother rewards those who dare wisely"

social: challenge: "Maintaining order under constant threat" need: "Strong community bonds, clear hierarchy" religious_answer: "The Fire Mother's children must aid each other"

practical: fear: "When will next eruption happen?" need: "Prediction, or at least illusion of control" religious_answer: "Priests read the mountain's signs"

resulting_religion: name: "The Way of the Fire Mother"

core_beliefs:

• "The Fire Mother is the volcano itself"
• "She creates (fertile land) and destroys (eruptions)"
• "Both creation and destruction are sacred"
• "The good die into her embrace; the wicked are denied rest"

afterlife: good_death: "Soul joins the Fire Mother, becomes part of new creation" bad_death: "Soul wanders as cold ghost, never warm, never resting"

priesthood: role: "Read signs, interpret the Mother's will" selection: "Those who survive near-death by volcano" power: "Significant - can declare evacuations" limitation: "Failed predictions are fatal to career (and sometimes life)"

practices: daily: "Brief prayer at dawn (thanking Mother for another day)" weekly: "Community meal where best food offered to fire" seasonal: "Major festivals around planting and harvest" crisis: "Sacrifices (goods, occasionally human historically) during eruption warnings"

unique_elements: death_acceptance: "Funerals are celebrations, not mourning" fire_walking: "Coming-of-age ritual, tests faith" ash_marking: "Wearing volcano ash as blessing/protection" cold_taboo: "Insulting to wish someone 'stay cool' or similar"

moral_code: virtues: ["Bravery", "Generosity", "Acceptance"] vices: ["Cowardice", "Hoarding", "Denial of death"] interesting_gray: "Is fleeing an eruption cowardice or wisdom? Priests decide."

relationship_to_power: with_chiefs: "Chiefs rule the living; priests speak for the Mother" tension: "Chiefs need priests to legitimize; priests need chiefs to enforce" resolution: "Intermarriage, shared power, occasional conflict"

contrast_with_mainland: mainland_religion: "Sky Father worship (distant, orderly, predictable)" ashborn_view: "Sky Father is cold and distant. Fire Mother is present." mainland_view: "Fire Mother worship is death cult, barbaric" actual_function: "Both religions solve their cultures' specific problems"

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Name

Collaborative Worldbuilding

Description

Use structured methods for group world creation

When

Building worlds with players, co-writers, or development teams

Context

Microscope RPG by Ben Robbins revolutionized collaborative worldbuilding: "You won't play the game in chronological order. You can defy the limits of time and space, jumping backward or forward to explore the parts of the history that interest you."

WHY COLLABORATIVE WORKS:

• Multiple perspectives prevent blind spots
• Player investment when they helped create
• Surprises for everyone (including the GM/author)
• Faster coverage of more ground

METHODS:

• Microscope: Fractal history (periods → events → scenes)
• Kingdom: Focus on one community at a crisis point
• Two-Layer Rule: Combine two traits for instant complexity

Example

// collaborative-worldbuilding.yaml method: "Microscope Adaptation for Game Worlds"

setup: participants: "GM + 4 players" session_time: "2-3 hours" goal: "Create shared history for campaign"

step_1_big_picture: name: "The Palette" process:

• "Each person adds 1-2 things they WANT to see"
• "Each person adds 1-2 things they DON'T want to see"

example: want:

• "Magic with real costs"
• "Morally gray factions"
• "Mysterious ancient ruins"

dont_want:

• "Pure good vs evil"
• "Chosen one narratives"
• "Comedy/parody tone"

step_2_bookends: name: "Start and End" process:

• "Group agrees on starting period (oldest history)"
• "Group agrees on ending period (current era)"

example: start: "The Dawn - First peoples settle the land" end: "The Succession - Three claimants vie for empty throne"

step_3_periods: name: "Fill the History" process:

• "Take turns adding Periods (eras of history)"
• "Each Period marked Light (good times) or Dark (bad times)"
• "No discussion needed - person's word is final"

example: periods:

• "The Dawn (Light) - Peaceful settlement"
• "The First Kingdom (Light) - Unity and prosperity"
• "The Mage Wars (Dark) - Magic destroys half the land"
• "The Healing (Light) - Slow recovery"
• "The New Order (Dark) - Authoritarian response to chaos"
• "The Succession (Dark) - Current crisis"

step_4_events: name: "Key Moments" process:

• "Take turns adding Events within Periods"
• "Events are specific moments, not eras"
• "Can add to any Period, not just your own"

example: in_mage_wars:

• "The Sundering - continent physically torn"
• "Death of the Archmage - ended the war"
• "The Burning of Thornwall - city destroyed"

step_5_scenes: name: "Roleplay Moments" process:

• "Pick an Event to explore"
• "Frame a question (What did the Archmage's final words reveal?)"
• "Roleplay the scene to answer it"
• "Answer becomes canon"

example: question: "Why did the Archmage die?" scene: "His final confrontation" answer_discovered: "He sacrificed himself to seal a rift. But it's failing now."

integration_with_campaign: gm_role: "Fill in details between sessions, consistent with established facts" player_role: "Characters can discover or be connected to established history" ongoing: "Can continue adding to history as campaign reveals more"

alternative_quick_method: name: "Two-Trait Combination" process:

• "Each player picks 2 random cultural traits"
• "Combine them to create a faction"
• "Explain how they interact"

example: traits: ["Scholar" + "Pirate"] result: "The Archive Fleet - pirates who steal and preserve forbidden books" interaction: "Academic rigour applied to piracy; ships are floating libraries"

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Name

Naming Language System

Description

Create consistent, pronounceable names using basic conlang principles

When

Names across a culture feel random or inconsistent

Context

A naming language is "Conlangs Lite" - you don't need grammar or complete vocabulary. You just need consistent sounds.

BENEFITS:

• Names feel like they belong together
• Different cultures sound different
• Readers can guess which culture someone is from
• You can generate new names that fit

THE MINIMUM VIABLE NAMING LANGUAGE: 1. Phoneme inventory (what sounds exist) 2. Phonotactics (how sounds combine) 3. Structure rules (syllable patterns) 4. Romanization (how to write them)

Example

// naming-language.yaml culture: "The Northern Clans"

PHONEME INVENTORY (what sounds exist in this language)

phonemes: consonants: stops: ["k", "g", "t", "d", "b"] fricatives: ["f", "v", "s", "h"] clusters: ["sk", "gr", "br", "th", "fr", "kr"] vowels: short: ["a", "o", "u", "e", "i"] long: ["aa", "oo"] combinations: ["ae", "ei", "au"]

WHAT SOUNDS DON'T EXIST

excluded_sounds:

• "soft sounds like 'sh', 'ch', 'j'"
• "long vowel combinations like 'aia'"
• "double consonants like 'tt' (except 'kk')"

why: "Want harsh, cold feel"

SYLLABLE STRUCTURE

phonotactics: allowed_structures:

• "CV (ka, to, si)"
• "CVC (kor, thal, brun)"
• "CCV (ska, gro, frei)"
• "CCVC (skald, thron, grind)"

word_patterns: short_words: "1-2 syllables for common names" long_words: "3 syllables maximum for places"

NAME STRUCTURES

naming_patterns: person_names: structure: "[Root]-[Suffix]" male_suffixes: ["-rik", "-mund", "-ar", "-orn"] female_suffixes: ["-a", "-hild", "-run", "-dis"] examples: male: ["Thorik", "Baemund", "Skaldar", "Grimmorn"] female: ["Freia", "Brunhild", "-run", "Valdis"]

place_names: structure: "[Descriptor]-[Type]" descriptors: ["Frost", "Grey", "Storm", "Iron", "Old"] types: ["-heim", "-gard", "-fell", "-mark", "-hold"] examples: ["Frostheim", "Greygard", "Stormfell", "Ironmark", "Oldhold"]

clan_names: structure: "[Animal/Object]-[Action]" examples: ["Wolfborn", "Stonefist", "Stormrider", "Ironheart"]

PRONUNCIATION GUIDE

romanization: "ae": "long 'a' as in 'day'" "ei": "'eye'" "au": "'ow' as in 'now'" "th": "like 'thin', not 'the'" "j": "DOESN'T EXIST - don't use it"

CONTRAST WITH OTHER CULTURES

comparison: northern_clans: "Harsh consonants, short words (Thorik, Skald, Grimm)" southern_empire: "Flowing sounds, longer words (Valerian, Aelindra, Sevanis)" eastern_tribes: "Meaning-compounds (Storm-born, River-walker)"

GENERATION PROCESS

how_to_create_new_names: step_1: "Pick allowed syllables: Brae-" step_2: "Add from patterns: Brae- + -mund" step_3: "Check pronounceability: Braemund - works!" step_4: "Check for duplicates or awkward meanings" step_5: "Document it so you don't reuse"

Anti-Patterns

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Name

Worldbuilder's Disease

Description

Endlessly worldbuilding instead of actually creating the story/game

Wrong

Spending 6 months on a calendar system for a game where time doesn't matter. Writing 50,000 words of lore before writing a single scene. Perfecting a magic system that no character uses. Creating 100 cultures when the story visits 3 locations.

Right

Build what you need for the next chapter/session. Use iceberg tips to imply depth without building it. Set deadlines and stop worldbuilding when reached. Ask: "Does my story/game need this?" If not, don't build it yet.

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Name

Fantasy Counterpart Culture

Description

Taking a real culture and just adding fantasy names

Wrong

"The Desert People" who are just Arabs with different names. "The Honor-Bound Warriors" who are just Japan with swords. "The Noble Savages" who are just Indigenous stereotypes.

Right

Start from environment, not from Earth culture. Mix influences from multiple cultures. Add elements that couldn't exist on Earth. Ask: "What would be different given THIS world's specific history?" Research respectfully if inspired by real cultures.

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Name

Info Dumping

Description

Front-loading all the lore instead of revealing through experience

Wrong

Opening chapter: "1000 years ago, the first king..." NPC dialogue: "As you know, our people have a tradition of..." Codex entry before the player even cares.

Right

Reveal through environment: worn statues, old monuments Reveal through character: "Grandmother always said..." Reveal through conflict: "They hate us because 100 years ago..." Wait for players to ask, then have answers ready.

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Name

Unexplored Implications

Description

Adding cool elements without following through on consequences

Wrong

Healing magic exists, but hospitals still function as normal. Teleportation exists, but trade routes matter. Dragons exist, but warfare is still infantry-based. Immortal elves exist, but their culture matches 80-year-lifespan humans.

Right

For every magical/technological element, ask:

• How does this change warfare?
• How does this change economy?
• How does this change social structure?
• What new problems does it create?
• Who benefits? Who loses?

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Name

Monolithic Relationships

Description

All members of culture A feel the same about culture B

Wrong

All dwarves hate all elves. All humans fear all magic. All nobles are corrupt.

Right

Factions within cultures have different views. Individuals can defy cultural norms. Relationships evolve over time. Official positions differ from personal ones. Trade continues even during wars.

Worldbuilding - Sharp Edges

Magic Systems That Break Economic Logic

Id

magic-breaks-economy

Severity

CRITICAL

Description

Teleportation, creation, and infinite resources destroy believable economies. This is the #1 killer of internal consistency.

Symptoms

• Players ask "why doesn't everyone just teleport goods?"
• Money becomes meaningless when you can create gold
• Trade routes exist for no logical reason
• Why would anyone farm if mages can create food?
• Entire professions have no reason to exist

Detection Pattern

teleport|create|conjure|summon|transmut|infinite|unlimited

Situation

You add a cool magical ability without thinking through the economic implications. Creation magic, teleportation, infinite resources, or perfect healing all have cascading effects on how a society would actually function.

Why

Smart people (including players) will find the optimal strategy. If magic provides a shortcut, everyone with access would use it. Your medieval trade economy can't coexist with free teleportation unless there are severe constraints.

The Warcraft team learned this lesson repeatedly - every time they added a convenient feature, it had cascading effects they didn't anticipate.

Solution

Every magical ability needs constraints that preserve economic logic:

TELEPORTATION CONSTRAINTS:

CREATION MAGIC CONSTRAINTS:

TEST YOUR MAGIC SYSTEM: 1. "If I were a smart merchant, how would I exploit this?" 2. "What jobs become obsolete? Is that okay for my story?" 3. "Who gets rich? Who gets poor?" 4. "Would this magic make war easier or harder?"

References

• https://worldbuildingworkshop.com/ - Economics section
• Sanderson's Second Law: Limitations > Powers

Monocultures (Planet of Hats Syndrome)

Id

planet-of-hats

Severity

CRITICAL

Description

Every member of a species or culture has the same single defining trait. "The warrior race," "the merchant people," "the honorable elves."

Symptoms

• All members of a culture act identically
• You can predict every NPC from knowing their species
• Cultures defined by single adjectives
• No internal factions, debates, or diversity
• World feels like a theme park with "zones"

Detection Pattern

all.are|every.is|always|never|the.race|the.people

Situation

You design a culture around a single trait for simplicity. "Dwarves = miners." "Elves = nature-lovers." "Orcs = warriors." This makes worldbuilding easier but creates shallow, predictable worlds.

Why

Real cultures have:

• Regional variations (New Yorkers vs Texans are both American)
• Class differences (nobles vs peasants within same culture)
• Generational gaps (old vs young disagree)
• Subcultures and countercultures (punks exist everywhere)
• Individual variation (some people reject their culture)

Ann Leckie's Ancillary series explicitly mocks this - empires THINK conquered peoples are monocultures, but they're wrong. That's the point.

Solution

MINIMUM VIABLE CULTURAL DIVERSITY:

Every culture needs at least:

  culture:
    name: "Your Culture"
  
    core_values: # 2-3 things most members agree on
      - "Value 1"
      - "Value 2"
  
    internal_factions: # 3-4 subgroups that disagree
      faction_a:
        specialty: "What they do"
        values: "What they believe"
        tension_with: "Who they clash with"
  
      faction_b:
        specialty: "Different thing"
        values: "Different beliefs"
        tension_with: "Different enemies"
  
    outliers: # Individuals who don't fit
      - "The poet in the warrior culture"
      - "The skeptic in the religious society"
      - "The traditionalist in the progressive city"
  
    relationships: # Not monolithic
      with_culture_x:
        official: "What governments say"
        actual: "What people do"
        exceptions: "Individual variations"

QUICK FIX: THE TWO-HAT METHOD Instead of "the warrior race," try "the warrior-poet race" or "the merchant-mystic culture." Two traits create instant complexity.

References

• https://mythcreants.com/blog/avoiding-the-planet-of-hats/
• Writing Excuses 14.03: World of Hats

Worldbuilder's Disease (Infinite Preparation)

Id

worldbuilders-disease

Severity

HIGH

Description

Spending so much time worldbuilding that you never actually write the story or ship the game. This is procrastination disguised as productivity.

Symptoms

• 50,000 words of lore, zero words of actual story
• Detailed calendar system for a game where time doesn't matter
• Years of "preparation" before starting
• Every question leads to more worldbuilding, not storytelling
• I can't start until I know everything

Detection Pattern

not ready|need to finish|more detail|complete the

Situation

You keep finding new aspects of the world to develop. The more you build, the more questions arise. It feels productive - you're working! But the story/game never gets made.

Why

Tolkien spent 60 years building Middle-earth. Most people don't have that luxury. More importantly, Tolkien LOVED worldbuilding for its own sake - it wasn't procrastination for him. For most people, it is.

Underlying causes:

• Fear of starting (what if it's bad?)
• Fear of finishing (what if people don't like it?)
• Perfectionism (it's not ready yet)
• Fear of losing ideas (I'll forget if I don't write it all down)

Brandon Sanderson explicitly warns against this in his lectures.

Solution

THE CURE: DEADLINES AND MINIMUMS

1. Set a hard deadline for worldbuilding phase

• "I have 2 weeks. Then I start writing/building."

2. Use the Iceberg Method

• Build only what you need for the NEXT chapter/level
• Hint at depth without creating it
• Add details as needed during creation

3. Minimum Viable World For a story: You need the location(s) it happens, the rules that affect plot For a game: You need what players will see and interact with

4. The "90% Rule"

• You need to KNOW 50% of your world
• You need to HINT at 90%
• You need to SHOW 10%
• Only build what you show. Hint at the rest.

5. Write First, Worldbuild to Support

• Write the scene. Hit a question? Answer it minimally.
• "What do they eat?" → "Bread and fish" (done, keep writing)
• NOT → "Let me design the entire agricultural system"

WARNING SIGNS:

• You're building areas the story never visits
• You're detailing history no character remembers
• You're designing languages no one speaks on-page
• You've spent more time on lore than on scenes

References

• https://www.tckpublishing.com/worldbuilders-disease/
• Sanderson's 2024 Worldbuilding Lecture

Historical Timelines That Don't Make Sense

Id

timeline-inconsistency

Severity

HIGH

Description

Events don't follow cause-and-effect. Technology doesn't progress. Empires last impossibly long. Players find contradictions.

Symptoms

• Why didn't they invent X if they had Y 1000 years ago?
• Empires lasting 5000+ years with no change
• Technology frozen at medieval level for millennia
• Events happen but have no lasting consequences
• Players find plot holes in your history

Detection Pattern

year|age|era|century|millenn|ancient|history

Situation

You build history by adding cool events without checking if they're compatible with each other or lead to logical consequences.

Why

Real history shows patterns:

• Technology accelerates (stone age: millions of years; industrial: centuries; digital: decades)
• Empires rise and fall (200-500 years typical, 1000 years rare)
• Languages drift (unrecognizable after ~500-1000 years without writing)
• Population compounds (doubles every ~300 years in good conditions)

If your medieval world has been medieval for 10,000 years, something is preventing change - and you need to explain what. Otherwise, smart readers will ask questions.

Solution

TIMELINE CONSISTENCY CHECKLIST:

  timeline_check:
    technology:
      - "If metallurgy exists, why no agriculture?"
      - "If sailing exists, why haven't they explored X?"
      - "What prevents gunpowder/printing/steam?"
      - "If magic exists, why didn't it change tech development?"
  
    politics:
      - "How does this empire maintain control over this distance?"
      - "Why hasn't anyone rebelled in 1000 years?"
      - "What prevents other empires from forming?"
      - "Who benefits from the status quo? Who loses?"
  
    society:
      - "With this birth/death rate, what's the population?"
      - "How do they feed this many people?"
      - "What prevents social change over centuries?"
      - "Why do traditions persist this long?"
  
    cause_effect:
      - "This war happened. What changed because of it?"
      - "This plague killed 30%. How did that affect X?"
      - "This discovery was made. Who exploited it?"

REALISTIC DURATION GUIDELINES:

EXPLANATIONS FOR STASIS: If you NEED a long-static period, explain it:

• Magic makes technology unnecessary
• A cataclysm reset progress
• Religious prohibition on innovation
• An immortal ruler prevents change
• External threat keeps everyone focused on survival

References

• https://inkwellideas.com/worldbuilding/worldbuilding-timelines/
• Worldbuilding: Timelines - Inkwell Ideas

Insensitive Fantasy Counterpart Cultures

Id

fantasy-counterpart-culture

Severity

HIGH

Description

Taking a real-world culture and just adding fantasy names. Often becomes stereotyping or exoticization, especially of non-Western cultures.

Symptoms

• "Desert People" who are just Arabs with different hats
• "Honor-Bound Warriors" who are just Japanese samurai
• "Noble Savages" based on Indigenous stereotypes
• "Mysterious Eastern Mystics" based on Asian stereotypes
• Culture has all the stereotypes, none of the depth

Detection Pattern

inspired by|based on|like the|similar to|eastern|tribal

Situation

You want cultural diversity in your world, so you take Earth cultures and reskin them. This often flattens rich real cultures into stereotypes.

Why

N.K. Jemisin warns: "People go into creating a world that is not like ours with their embedded assumptions about how our world works still firmly in place. So they end up creating our world but with tentacle sharks."

Problems with direct counterparts:

• Reinforces stereotypes (both positive and negative)
• Reduces complex cultures to recognizable shorthand
• Can be disrespectful to source cultures
• Limits creativity (why make a new world if it's just Earth?)
• Readers from that culture will notice errors

Solution

INSTEAD OF COPYING:

1. Start from Environment, Not Culture

• "Desert" → Design culture around water scarcity, heat, nomadism
• Don't start with "I want Arab culture" → Start with constraints

2. Mix Multiple Influences

• Take elements from 3+ cultures, none dominant
• Add fantasy elements that couldn't exist on Earth
• The mix should be unrecognizable as any one source

3. Ask "What Would Be Different?"

• "What if they had magic AND lived in a desert?"
• "How would their history differ from Earth?"
• "What would they believe given THIS world's reality?"

4. Research Respectfully

• If inspired by real culture, research deeply
• Consult sensitivity readers from that background
• Ask: "Would someone from this culture be offended?"

THE TEST: Can a reader immediately identify the Earth culture you copied?

• Yes → You've made a counterpart culture. Reconsider.
• No → You've made something new. Good.

GOOD EXAMPLE: The Alethi in Stormlight Archives:

• Inspired by aspects of East Asian + Korean + original elements
• But: Different gender roles around literacy, lighteyes/darkeyes caste,

symmetry taboos, gem-based economy

• Result: Feels original, not like any Earth culture

References

• N.K. Jemisin MasterClass on cultural worldbuilding
• Writing the Other: A Practical Approach

Names That Don't Belong Together

Id

naming-inconsistency

Severity

MEDIUM

Description

Mix of random naming styles breaks immersion. "Sir Bob of Xylphthoria." Names from different cultures sound identical. Unpronounceable names.

Symptoms

• Fantasy names next to modern names
• "Sir Bob" alongside "Xylprthax the Undying"
• Different cultures have identical naming patterns
• Players can't pronounce or remember names
• Names look like keyboard mashing

Detection Pattern

name|naming|character|place

Situation

You make up names on the fly without a system. Or you have a system but abandon it for "cool" names. The result is inconsistent.

Why

Names signal culture. In real life, you can guess someone's background from their name. "Takeshi" suggests Japanese. "Vladimir" suggests Slavic. "Sean" suggests Irish. This works because languages have patterns.

When your fantasy names have no patterns, they feel random. When different cultures have the same patterns, they blur together.

Solution

CREATE A NAMING LANGUAGE (Light Version):

For each culture, define:

  culture_names:
    phonemes:
      consonants: ["k", "r", "th", "s"]  # Sounds that exist
      vowels: ["a", "e", "i", "o"]
      clusters: ["sk", "th", "kr"]  # Allowed combinations
      forbidden: ["j", "sh", "ph"]  # Sounds that DON'T exist
  
    structure:
      syllables: 1-3  # How many syllables typical
      pattern: "CVC" or "CVCV"  # Consonant-Vowel patterns
      endings: ["-ar", "-ik", "-on"]  # Common suffixes
  
    examples:
      people: ["Korath", "Sirek", "Tharan"]
      places: ["Skorheim", "Etharan", "Kirath"]

QUICK RULES: 1. Keep names under 4 syllables (readers give up on "Xylprthaxiel") 2. Important characters get easier names 3. Test: Can a player say it on first try? 4. Different cultures should SOUND different 5. If players keep mispronouncing it, change it

THE BOB TEST: If you name a character "Bob" in your fantasy world, does it stick out?

• If yes: Your other names have a consistent style (good)
• If no: Your names are too random (fix needed)

References

• https://mythcreants.com/blog/how-to-create-a-simple-language/
• Conlanging 101 - Author Vivian Sayan

Religions No One Would Actually Believe

Id

religion-no-believers

Severity

MEDIUM

Description

Designing religions that exist as window dressing rather than as belief systems that real people would genuinely follow.

Symptoms

• Religion has rules but no believers with genuine faith
• "Evil god" that people worship for no reason
• Religion is just "fantasy Christianity" with name changes
• Believers act like they don't actually believe
• Religion doesn't answer any existential questions

Detection Pattern

god|religion|faith|worship|belief|temple|priest

Situation

You add a religion to your world because fantasy worlds "should have" religions, but you don't think about why people would actually believe it.

Why

Real religions emerge to serve psychological needs:

• Explain existence (Why are we here?)
• Promise continuation (What happens after death?)
• Provide moral framework (What should we do?)
• Create community (Who are our people?)
• Offer control/comfort (How do we get good outcomes?)

If your religion doesn't serve these needs, it won't feel real.

Solution

RELIGION DESIGN FROM NEEDS:

  religion_design:
    # What does this religion offer believers?
    answers:
      existence: "Why do people exist in this world?"
      death: "What happens after? Is there hope?"
      morality: "What is right? How should people act?"
      suffering: "Why do bad things happen? Is there meaning?"
      community: "Who belongs? Who are the outsiders?"
  
    # What makes people BELIEVE?
    evidence:
      # In a world where gods are REAL and visible:
      - "Miracles happen and are witnessed"
      - "Prayers are sometimes answered"
      - "Divine punishment is observable"
  
      # In a world where gods are MATTERS OF FAITH:
      - "Traditional stories explain the world"
      - "Community reinforces belief"
      - "Coincidences are interpreted as signs"
  
    # Who enforces and benefits?
    power:
      priesthood: "Who speaks for the gods? How are they chosen?"
      hierarchy: "Who has authority? How is it maintained?"
      politics: "How does religion interact with secular power?"
      dissent: "What happens to skeptics and heretics?"

THE BELIEF TEST: Would YOU believe this religion if you grew up in this world?

• Does it answer the questions you'd have?
• Does it offer comfort for the fears you'd feel?
• Does it make sense given what's observable?

References

• https://inkwellideas.com/worldbuilding/worldbuilding-religion-design/
• The Angry GM: Conflicted Beliefs

Geography and Climate That Don't Make Sense

Id

geography-climate-mismatch

Severity

MEDIUM

Description

Biomes placed randomly without regard to climate logic. Deserts next to rainforests with no transition. Impossible geography.

Symptoms

• Desert directly borders tundra
• Rivers flow uphill or have no source
• Mountains appear in random locations
• Biomes make no geographic sense
• "Because it's fantasy" when questioned

Detection Pattern

map|geography|climate|biome|desert|forest|mountain

Situation

You place biomes on a map based on what looks cool or what you need for the story, without considering how real geography works.

Why

Even fantasy readers have unconscious expectations about geography:

• Deserts are hot and dry (usually interior or rain shadow)
• Mountains form in ranges, not randomly
• Rivers flow downhill to the sea
• Biomes transition gradually, not abruptly

Breaking these expectations breaks immersion unless justified.

Solution

BASIC GEOGRAPHY RULES:

  biome_placement:
    # Temperature (equator → poles)
    latitude:
      equator: "tropical"
      mid: "temperate"
      poles: "arctic"
  
    # Moisture (ocean → interior)
    longitude:
      coastal: "wetter"
      interior: "drier"
  
    # Elevation effects
    mountains:
      windward: "wet (rain shadow)"
      leeward: "dry"
      high: "colder"
  
    # Transitions
    rule: "Biomes should transition gradually"
    example: "Desert → Scrubland → Grassland → Forest"
    not: "Desert → Rainforest (no transition)"
  
  river_rules:
    - "Flow downhill (from mountains to sea)"
    - "Start from snowmelt, springs, or lakes"
    - "Don't split (tributaries join, not separate)"
    - "Cities form at mouths, fords, confluences"
  
  mountain_rules:
    - "Form in ranges (tectonic plates)"
    - "Young mountains are tall and sharp"
    - "Old mountains are worn and rounded"
    - "Volcanoes can be isolated (hot spots)"

FANTASY EXCEPTIONS: You CAN break these rules if:

• Magic explicitly causes the anomaly
• Divine intervention is canon
• You acknowledge it's unusual in-world
• It serves the story and you accept the inconsistency

References

• https://worldbuildingworkshop.com/2020/11/27/climates-and-biomes/
• Climate Modeling 101 - Universe Factory

Technology That Doesn't Fit the Society

Id

technology-anachronism

Severity

MEDIUM

Description

Mix of technology levels that don't make sense together. Advanced tech in one area, primitive in another, with no explanation.

Symptoms

• Plate armor exists but no gunpowder
• Printing press but medieval economics
• Advanced medicine but primitive sanitation
• Magic that should have replaced technology hasn't

Detection Pattern

technology|invent|advance|medieval|ancient

Situation

You want the aesthetic of a certain tech level (usually medieval) but include conveniences from other eras without considering whether they're compatible.

Why

Technologies are interconnected:

• Printing requires paper-making, metallurgy, literacy
• Plate armor implies metallurgical sophistication
• Advanced sailing implies astronomy and mathematics
• Each technology has prerequisites and consequences

The question isn't "could this exist?" but "why DOESN'T everything else exist that would follow from it?"

Solution

TECHNOLOGY CONSISTENCY CHECK:

For any technology, ask: 1. Prerequisites: What other tech/knowledge is needed? 2. Implications: What would logically follow from this? 3. Blockers: If implications didn't happen, why not?

  example_check:
    technology: "Plate armor"
  
    prerequisites:
      - "Advanced metallurgy"
      - "Specialized craftsmen"
      - "Horses strong enough to carry armored knights"
      - "Wealth to pay for it"
  
    implications:
      - "Should also have advanced weapons"
      - "Should have metal tools widely available"
      - "Mining industry should be significant"
  
    if_you_have_plate_but_no_gunpowder:
      options:
        - "Gunpowder ingredients don't exist here"
        - "It was invented but banned/forgotten"
        - "Magic makes gunpowder unnecessary/useless"
        - "The society taboos explosive weapons"
      choose_one_and_explain: true

MAGIC AS BLOCKER: Magic can explain tech gaps:

• "Why develop printing when scribes use copying magic?"
• "Why develop medicine when healing magic exists?"
• "Why develop gunpowder when fireballs are better?"

But then: Who has access to that magic? What about those who don't?

References

• https://mythicscribes.com/community/threads/anachronistic-technology-in-a-fantasy-setting.6214/
• SFWA: Worldbuilding with the Medieval Industrial Revolution

Retcon Spiral (Warcraft Syndrome)

Id

retcon-spiral

Severity

MEDIUM

Description

Making changes to established lore that create more problems than they solve, requiring more retcons, leading to lore chaos.

Symptoms

• Fans keep a list of contradictions
• "That was retconned" becomes common phrase
• Writers lose track of what's canon
• New reveals contradict old ones
• Lore becomes incomprehensible to newcomers

Detection Pattern

retcon|actually|reveal|twist|secret

Situation

You want to add a cool new revelation, but it contradicts established facts. You retcon. That creates new contradictions. You retcon those. The lore becomes a mess.

Why

Chris Metzen (Warcraft) acknowledged this: "There are literally thousands of characters, hundreds of locations... Sometimes things do fall through the cracks."

Retcons can work when carefully done (Warcraft's eredar retcon improved the story). But careless retcons compound into chaos.

Solution

RETCON MANAGEMENT:

Before retconning, ask: 1. Is it necessary? Can the new idea coexist with old lore? 2. What breaks? List everything affected by the change 3. Can you fix without breaking? Reinterpret instead of replace 4. Is the new thing worth it? Better story > lore purity, but is it MUCH better?

ALTERNATIVES TO RETCON:

  alternative_approaches:
    reinterpretation:
      description: "The old info was true, just incomplete"
      example: "We thought X, but actually X was only part of the story"
  
    unreliable_narrator:
      description: "The old source was wrong or lying"
      example: "That history was written by the victors"
  
    parallel_truth:
      description: "Both old and new are true"
      example: "Different cultures remember it differently"
  
    soft_retcon:
      description: "Just don't mention it anymore"
      example: "We never explain the contradiction, move on"

IF YOU MUST RETCON:

• Acknowledge it (don't gaslight fans)
• Explain why (better story? Fixed mistake?)
• Update all affected materials
• Have one person track canon

References

• https://warcraft.wiki.gg/wiki/Metzen_on_lore
• Warcraft Wiki: Retcon page

Worldbuilding - Validations

Magic System Must Define Limits

Id

magic-system-has-limits

Description

Per Sanderson's Second Law: Limitations are more interesting than powers. Every magic system document should explicitly define what magic CANNOT do.

Pattern

magic|spell|ability|power|arcane|mystic

File Glob

*/.{md,yaml,json,txt}

Match

present

Context Pattern

cannot|limit|cost|restrict|weakness|forbidden|impossible

Message

Magic system detected but no clear limitations found. Add explicit sections for:

• Hard limits (what magic absolutely cannot do)
• Costs (what using magic requires)
• Weaknesses (what counters or blocks magic)

Severity

warning

Autofix

Magic Should Address Economic Impact

Id

magic-economic-impact

Description

Magic that affects production, transportation, or resources needs economic consideration to maintain world consistency.

Pattern

teleport|create|conjure|summon|transmut|heal|grow|multiply

File Glob

*/.{md,yaml,json,txt}

Match

present

Context Pattern

cost|rare|limit|economy|trade|price|scarc

Message

Potentially economy-breaking magic detected. Consider documenting:

• Why doesn't everyone use this?
• What economic systems remain necessary?
• Who controls access to this magic?

Severity

info

Autofix

Cultures Should Have Internal Diversity

Id

culture-has-diversity

Description

To avoid "Planet of Hats" syndrome, cultures should document internal factions, subgroups, or variations.

Pattern

culture|civilization|people|race|species|nation

File Glob

*/.{md,yaml,json,txt}

Match

present

Context Pattern

faction|subgroup|division|internal|disagree|tension|sect|clan|tribe

Message

Culture defined but no internal diversity documented. Consider adding:

• 2-4 subgroups or factions within the culture
• Internal tensions or debates
• Individuals who don't fit the mold

Severity

info

Autofix

Intercultural Relationships Should Not Be Monolithic

Id

culture-not-monolithic-relationship

Description

Relationships between cultures should have nuance - not "all X hate all Y."

Pattern

hate|enemy|ally|friend|distrust|fear

File Glob

*/culture*.{md,yaml,json,txt}

Match

present

Context Pattern

some|exception|official|individual|generation|faction

Message

Strong intercultural relationship detected. Ensure you document:

• Official vs actual relationship
• Exceptions and individual variations
• Historical changes in the relationship

Severity

info

Autofix

Historical Events Should Show Cause-Effect

Id

timeline-has-causation

Description

Events should lead to consequences. "X happened" needs "therefore Y changed."

Pattern

year|age|era|century|event|battle|war|founded

File Glob

*/.{md,yaml,json,txt}

Match

present

Context Pattern

because|result|consequence|led to|caused|therefore|aftermath

Message

Historical events detected without clear cause-effect chains. For each major event, document:

• What caused it?
• What changed because of it?
• How does it affect the present?

Severity

info

Autofix

Check for Unrealistic Durations

Id

timeline-reasonable-duration

Description

Flag suspiciously long periods of stability or stagnation that might need explanation.

Pattern

\b\d{4,}\s*(years?|centuries)

File Glob

*/.{md,yaml,json,txt}

Match

present

Context Pattern

because|magic|immortal|stasis|prevent|explain

Message

Very long time period detected (1000+ years). Ensure you explain why:

• Technology didn't advance
• Social structures stayed stable
• No major changes occurred

Severity

info

Autofix

Conflicts Must Have Clear Motivations

Id

conflict-has-motivation

Description

Every conflict needs resource-based or ideological motivation for all parties. "They're evil" is not sufficient.

Pattern

conflict|war|enemy|battle|feud|fight

File Glob

*/.{md,yaml,json,txt}

Match

present

Context Pattern

resource|stake|motivation|reason|want|need|fear|believe

Message

Conflict detected without clear motivations. Document for EACH side:

• What do they want?
• Why do they believe they're right?
• What do they fear if they lose?

Severity

warning

Autofix

Conflicts Should Show Multiple Perspectives

Id

conflict-multiple-perspectives

Description

Avoid pure good vs evil. Each side should have understandable motivations.

Pattern

villain|enemy|evil|antagonist

File Glob

*/.{md,yaml,json,txt}

Match

present

Context Pattern

perspective|view|believe|justify|understand|reason

Message

Antagonist/villain detected. Ensure you document:

• Their perspective on the conflict
• Why they believe they're justified
• Moderates or sympathetic members

Severity

info

Autofix

Names Should Follow Consistent System

Id

naming-has-system

Description

Names within a culture should have documented phonetic rules or patterns.

Pattern

name.:.[A-Z][a-z]+|[A-Z][a-z]+.*name

File Glob

*/culture*.{md,yaml,json,txt}

Match

present

Context Pattern

phoneme|syllable|pattern|structure|suffix|prefix|convention

Message

Names detected without naming convention documentation. Consider creating a naming system with:

• Allowed sounds/phonemes
• Syllable structure rules
• Common suffixes/prefixes
• Example names

Severity

info

Autofix

Names Should Be Pronounceable

Id

naming-pronounceable

Description

Flag names with excessive consonant clusters or unusual patterns that may be hard to pronounce.

Pattern

[A-Z][a-z][^aeiou]{4,}[a-z]

File Glob

*/.{md,yaml,json,txt}

Match

absent

Message

Potentially unpronounceable name detected (4+ consonants in a row). Consider:

• Breaking up consonant clusters
• Simplifying for important characters
• Testing with beta readers

Severity

info

Autofix

Economy Should Account for Magic/Tech

Id

economy-addresses-magic

Description

Economic systems should consider how magic or advanced technology affects trade, production, and scarcity.

Pattern

economy|trade|currency|market|merchant|gold

File Glob

*/.{md,yaml,json,txt}

Match

present

Context Pattern

magic|technology|impact|change|affect|despite

Message

Economic content detected. Ensure you address:

• How does magic/tech affect this economy?
• What remains scarce despite magic?
• Who benefits from the economic system?

Severity

info

Autofix

Check Food Production for Population

Id

economy-food-production

Description

Cities and populations need food sources. Medieval settings need ~90% farmers to support cities.

Pattern

city|population|kingdom|empire|million

File Glob

*/.{md,yaml,json,txt}

Match

present

Context Pattern

farm|food|agriculture|feed|grain|import

Message

Large population referenced. Consider documenting:

• Where does food come from?
• What percentage farms vs other work?
• Is food imported? From where?

Severity

info

Autofix

Religions Should Serve Psychological Needs

Id

religion-serves-needs

Description

Religions should answer existential questions and provide community benefits that explain why people believe.

Pattern

god|religion|faith|worship|belief|temple|priest

File Glob

*/.{md,yaml,json,txt}

Match

present

Context Pattern

death|afterlife|moral|community|meaning|purpose|fear

Message

Religion detected without psychological needs addressed. Document:

• What existential questions does it answer?
• What does it promise believers?
• Why would someone genuinely believe?

Severity

info

Autofix

Religions Should Have Power Dynamics

Id

religion-power-structure

Description

Who interprets religious doctrine matters politically.

Pattern

priest|temple|church|clergy|holy

File Glob

*/.{md,yaml,json,txt}

Match

present

Context Pattern

power|authority|hierarchy|select|corrupt|reform

Message

Religious institution detected. Document:

• Who has authority to interpret doctrine?
• How are religious leaders chosen?
• What is the relationship with secular power?

Severity

info

Autofix

Biomes Should Transition Gradually

Id

geography-biome-transitions

Description

Deserts don't border tundra without explanation. Check for logical biome transitions.

Pattern

desert|tundra|rainforest|jungle|arctic|tropical

File Glob

*/.{md,yaml,json,txt}

Match

present

Context Pattern

transition|border|gradient|magic|divine|anomaly

Message

Extreme biome type detected. Ensure transitions make sense:

• Desert → Scrubland → Grassland (not desert → rainforest)
• Tropical → Temperate → Arctic by latitude
• Or document magical/divine explanation

Severity

info

Autofix

Rivers Should Flow Correctly

Id

geography-river-logic

Description

Rivers flow downhill from mountains/highlands to sea. They don't split (tributaries join).

Pattern

river|stream|tributary|delta

File Glob

*/.{md,yaml,json,txt}

Match

present

Context Pattern

mountain|sea|ocean|source|mouth|flow

Message

River system detected. Verify:

• Rivers start in highlands (mountains, lakes)
• Rivers flow to sea/major lakes
• Tributaries join, not split
• Cities at strategic river points (fords, mouths)

Severity

info

Autofix

Lore Should Cross-Reference Consistently

Id

lore-cross-reference

Description

When multiple documents reference the same entity, details should match.

Pattern

see also|reference|related|mentioned in

File Glob

*/.{md,yaml,json,txt}

Match

present

Context Pattern

consistent|verify|check|same as

Message

Cross-reference detected. Maintain a master document of:

• Entity names and spellings
• Key dates and events
• Relationships between entities

Severity

info

Autofix

World Should Have Central Reference

Id

world-bible-exists

Description

Complex worlds benefit from a central "world bible" document that tracks key facts.

Pattern

world|setting|universe|lore

File Glob

**/README.md

Match

present

Context Pattern

bible|reference|master|index|central

Message

Consider creating a world bible document that indexes:

• All cultures and their key traits
• Major historical events and dates
• Magic system rules summary
• Key characters and relationships

Severity

info

Autofix